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Presence by tfawcus

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Wonderful poem about the symbolism about the whip-poor-will. I never heard that before. That is one of the things I love about mythology-there is almost more to learn. I also loved the image about "The slideshow of the mind."
Comment Written by emkoutny on 14-Jun-2015

Little Boy Lost by walbc

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Your sad explanation makes this poem clearer. I was thinking something happened to your son, because the description reminded me so much of mine until the last three stanzas. I am sure your help and support of your husband is boundless.
Comment Written by emkoutny on 14-Jun-2015

haiku (pretty butterfly) by Gypsy Blue Rose

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Nice description of the butterfly and a wonderful picture, although I've never seen a butterfly that looks like that! I like the image of the butterfly dancing free.
Comment Written by emkoutny on 14-Jun-2015

Percy the Penguin by Gypsy Blue Rose
Chapter 63 of the book 2015 Gypsy Gems

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Great picture of the penguin in the speedo! What a riot! Nice job on the rhyme scheme. Good luck in the contest and I hope you had fun writing this amusing poem.
Comment Written by emkoutny on 14-Jun-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Time Runs Out by Gypsy Blue Rose
Chapter 62 of the book 2015 Gypsy Gems

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Nice job on the double triolet. It seems like when you are a mother, time flows so quickly from one situation to the next. I know the years of my two babyhood was a blur because I was moving so fast. I liked the repeated line, "My true treasures are my daughters and my son."
Comment Written by emkoutny on 14-Jun-2015

THE TRUTH is in the WIND by Jannypan (Jan)

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There was a mood of melancholy which pervaded this poem. I particularly liked the repeated line, "The mournful wind was whispering your name," as if nature is sorrowful about the situation with this devious person s well as the narrator.
Comment Written by emkoutny on 14-Jun-2015

DeathWatch by petalangela
Chapter 34 of the book Insights

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I think it was brave of you to write about one of life's most terrible experiences. he was lucky to have such a loving wife by his side. I hope the writing helps you find some peace and I am sorry for your loss. This poem is strong and powerful.
Comment Written by emkoutny on 13-Jun-2015

Togetherness by BeasPeas
Chapter 31 of the book Either It's Love or It Isn't

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Sometimes love isn't all romance and roses. Sometimes it's just a regular Tuesday and someone needs to clean the bathroom. The main thing realizing that you signed up for the good and the bad and even the boring. My husband says, "Beauty fades, but a sense of humor lasts forever."
Comment Written by emkoutny on 13-Jun-2015

Jace is Eight by TAB_that's me

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Cute and humous poem for your grandson. I hope he enjoyed his poem and had a wonderful birthday. They sure get big fast, don't they? I sometimes wish my sone would slow down, but then I am always so excited to see what he gets into next.
Comment Written by emkoutny on 13-Jun-2015

The Flame by Walu Feral
Chapter 4 of the book It's More Fun In The Philippines

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You make this painful event humous and realistic. Your narrative is descriptive and your rhyme scheme is well done. The story of your life is incredible and I hope you get your autobiography published as it will be a best seller, I am sure.
Comment Written by emkoutny on 13-Jun-2015


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