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Chapter Veintinueve, (29) Part Dos by barbara.wilkey
Chapter 100 of the book Texas Dream Catcher

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I loved this piece, and this part was absolutely amazing! I love the tone you use, very unique! Plus that puppy picture in the beginning was absolutely adorable, like OMG! Anyways, you're a very talented author, keep up the good work! : )
-Castiel'sAngel
Comment Written by 222556 on 12-Jun-2016

Fairness? by candybarr
Chapter 23 of the book The land of the free

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It's really good, but I have to say, it's a little vague. The details seem to be very broad, and seeing from the other parts, this isn't usual. You can do much better, I believe.
Comment Written by 222556 on 12-Jun-2016

Three Old Friends. Part One by Ulla

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You did a great job with the story arc and the character development, I enjoyed the flow of this story and am excited for the other parts! Keep up the good work!
Comment Written by 222556 on 25-May-2016

The Exercise Game by wiserwoman

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I laughed quite a bit at this, and I understand the pain! I hate running and mom always insists I go with her! I loved the rhythm to this poem! Keep up the good work!
Comment Written by 222556 on 25-May-2016

Winters Sundown by l.raven

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This has beautiful and quite remarkable detail! The rhythm is amazing, and I liked the meaning to it! Keep up the good work!
Comment Written by 222556 on 25-May-2016

The King of Economic Sense by Erik Heen

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I love the rhythm and meaning behind this poem! It tells an amazing story and I can't wait to read more like this. You have a very unique writing style! I love it!
Comment Written by 222556 on 25-May-2016

Eternal Youth by Eric1

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This has a great rhythm to it, and the picture fits perfectly! I loved the story and meaning behind it! Keep up the great work!
Comment Written by 222556 on 25-May-2016

The Preacher In The Barn by Mastery
Chapter 12 of the book Falling Up The Stairs

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I loved the dialogue and story arc here! You have amazing character development, and a knack for displaying who they are. You ramble slightly, but it is easily overlooked. I am excited to read more! You did amazing on this!
Comment Written by 222556 on 25-May-2016

Ground Zero II: (Nuclear Bouquet) by Day Z Chayn
Chapter 373 of the book Ground Zero

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This is a little broken up in places you should've kept together; but I liked the rhythm to it and the basic structure to it!
Comment Written by 222556 on 25-May-2016

Plans Goes Awry by c_lucas
Chapter 19 of the book VIOLENT REUNION

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You did a great job on dialogue, and I enjoyed the story arc you've created! You have done a fantastic job with this piece! I'm excited to see the future development!
Comment Written by 222556 on 25-May-2016


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