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Sandra du Plessis

Prayer Power by JLR

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A very well-written linked-refrain about the power in prayer when we do not know which way to go and finding hope to fulfil our dreams and find God's grace.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 28-Sep-2020

Where Do Animals Live? by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 13 of the book 2020-5

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A very well-written poem teaching children where animals live and how they have their own place where they prefer to live. Like humans they all have their own home.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 28-Sep-2020

Web of Dreams by June Sargent

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A very well-written linked-refrain about a web of dreams when the sun goes down the moon start to cast her spells on the human minds who let the fantasy reign.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 28-Sep-2020

Autumn's Bountiful Days

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A very well-written 5-7-5 ode to autumn poem and the peaceful atmosphere it created over fields ready for the harvest with golden hues all over.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 28-Sep-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Time To Rake Again by AnnieDawn

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A very well-written Cinquain about the Autumn leaves that keep falling as we have to rake and pick it up to keep the garden neat and clean.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 28-Sep-2020

A Tail by robyn corum

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A very well-written fun poem and also thoughtful what are we doing with our lives, do we love with gratitude of just moaning and groaning day and night as bout how life sucks.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 28-Sep-2020

Missing in Action by MissMerri

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A very well-written heartfelt Cinquain about a young man losing his own life while saving others in the line of duty. A great honourable tribute.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 28-Sep-2020

Dogs Golf and RV

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A very well-written poem about happiness when we retire happiness becomes our new priority. There's no need to rush to the next meeting just be yourself.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 28-Sep-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

When The Cupboards Are Bare

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A very well-written poem about feeling happy when you can do good to others while you do not have enough for yourself but see that the little dog has something to eat.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 28-Sep-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

A Family Picnic

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A very well-written hundred word flash fiction about the say out at the river with a little fire to cook thd sausages and after a lovely day requests for ice cream ends the perfect day out.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 28-Sep-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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