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My Childhood Park by Joan E.

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A very well-written poem about your childhood playground with a roller coster and a merry go round with little horses going all around. We have them going from town to towns but the last thirty years we see a circus or playground about every five to ten years.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 29-May-2020

Shared Air

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A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the love birds that share the same air when they kiss each other after a deep breath. A very beautiful image photographed at the perfect moment.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 29-May-2020
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Rainy Nights

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A very well-written 3-7-5 poem about rainy nights that reminds us of our childhood days when we jump from puddle to puddle for fun.and getting dirty as much as we possibly can.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 29-May-2020
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Hourglass by Janice Canerdy

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A very well-written rhyming poem about the hourglass is set for the countdown and we should prepare to be ready when the last grain of sand falls, our time will be up forever.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 29-May-2020

Fragile Ground by Melissa Russell Deur

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A very well-written lune poem about being able to escape from an abusive relationship is a brave thing to do while stepping on the egg shells never to return back to the pace of abusement.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 29-May-2020

Dirt Devil

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A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the dirt devil that ran across the ground picking up dust and sand as he spins over the dry sand that make whirlwind and pick up everything in its path.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 29-May-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Rain of Revival by Bill Pinder
Chapter 64 of the book Morning Meditations

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A very well-written poem about the rain that brings revival in many ways, it nurtures the earth's soil and our soul's inner core when we have spiritual rain pouring on us too.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 29-May-2020

Failure is not an option!!! by joycetreasures

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A very well-written free verse poem about failures that sometimes are coming our way, through the hardships in life we learn determination to go on until we see success.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 29-May-2020

lune (groundhog munches blooms) by N.K. Wagner

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A very well-written lune poem about the groundhog eating his salad fresh and straight from the garden, no fuss about a plate or salad dressing only the freshest leaves possible.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 29-May-2020

18 Freshly Baked Cookies by The_Boy_Whodunnit

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A very well-written sonnet about the delight of fresh baked cookies from the oven. I have baked some cookies twice during the lockdown and each time it lasts only two days before it was all finished.
Comment Written by Sandra du Plessis on 29-May-2020


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