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Such Sweet Sorrow by frogbook

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I do enjoy a humorous poem. I am currently teaching Romeo and Juliet so this poem brings me much joy. The picture is a great addition as well. Good job!
Comment Written by Chunger on 21-Nov-2015
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A Stormy Day by Nosha17

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I really enjoy the images of the poem. To me there is a great amount of strength and power in event the first two lines. The speaker is strolling while the "waves lash fiercely" One would think that the waves would be the powerful one but the contrast between the casual stroll and the lashing is one to ponder.
Comment Written by Chunger on 21-Nov-2015

Gourmet's delight. by ellie6

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Fun poem with a very creative feel. Color choice works well with the energetic mood. It is almost child-like in rhythm. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Chunger on 26-Aug-2015
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Man's Deceptions by nomi338

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This picture gives me the creeps, but I guess that is the point. I just read your notes and I think the artist captured it perfectly. I like the rhymes and the flow works well with the tone of the poem. Good job.
Comment Written by Chunger on 25-Aug-2015

Karma's A Bitch by ExperiencingLiphe

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Great poem. I would consider adding quotation marks in the line:"I'm sorry" and "I was wrong". Great rhythm throughout and strong tone. Good job.
Comment Written by Chunger on 25-Aug-2015

Job Chapter 41 by Bicpen
Chapter 4 of the book Hail: The King of the Jews

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Powerful writing. I must admit that I have not read the first 40 chapters so I cannot comment on the connection to the book. However I can say, from a grammatical/punctuational point of view that you should consider making new dialogue a new paragraph. This helps the reader focus on the character and important words he/she says. Just a suggestion. Good job.
Comment Written by Chunger on 25-Aug-2015

Sweet Revenge by June Estep Fiorelli

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I have been so surprised by the immense creativity for this contest. This poem is no different. The tone is strong throughout and there is a very clear and entertaining story. Great job!
Comment Written by Chunger on 25-Aug-2015
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Not A Few by Liilia

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I enjoyed this poem, although the second line in the first two stanzas confused me. Were there "not a few" blessings or troubles? or possibly both? If it is one or the other I would include punctuation, but if not...it's okay to let the reader decide.
Comment Written by Chunger on 25-Aug-2015

John Doe by sandramitchell

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What an amazing story and the picture fits perfectly. It was easy to follow and include a wonderful message. Great job.
Comment Written by Chunger on 25-Aug-2015

Wallin' by victortouche

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I love that my initial question from reading the title was asked and answered in the poem. It was a clear poem with good voice and dialogue. It told a story. Good job.
Comment Written by Chunger on 25-Aug-2015


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