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haiku (poachers in focus) by Sam Bates

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Well this certainly is a different take on a rhino's horn. Imagine the possibilities if this were indeed true. For all I know, it could be the wave of the future. Great imagination, and the picture certainly fits the haiku perfectly.
Comment Written by JustisVita on 23-Jul-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
Frostbite by Gloria ....

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Very good sonnet written about the personification of winter. I enjoyed the jealousy of that winter seemed to have over spring. The visualization of the "chimney's curls of smoke" really brought this to life. Good job.
Comment Written by JustisVita on 23-Jul-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
haiku (tiger slaughtered) by IndianaIrish

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This is a haiku about the slaughter, and potential extinction of tigers. It is well written, and the thought process is intriguing. Tigers are such majestic animals. In fact, I just saw one last weekend at a zoo. It is disheartening to see them in captivity. Good job.
Comment Written by JustisVita on 23-Jul-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
A Rescue in the Making by rmj09
Chapter 3 of the book Missing Peace

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Another great chapter in the book "Missing Peace." I see that you take care of your parents who have Alzheimer's disease. Bless you. I can see that the disease flows over into your writing, from this chapter, where you wrote about it. Good job.
Comment Written by JustisVita on 22-Jul-2015
Fear by Ameraka
Chapter 1 of the book Spark into Flame

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Another powerful chapter in the lives of Sky and Ember. This time it is their wedding night. Great dialogue and the scene moves well.
Comment Written by JustisVita on 22-Jul-2015
The Rose by Mystic Angel 7777

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Wonderful poem about the beauty of a rose. I enjoyed the phrasing that the "thorns ensure survival." The photograph really brings the poem to life.
Comment Written by JustisVita on 22-Jul-2015
God what do you want from me? by Justin Chopin

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Beautiful poem that asks God the ultimate question: "What is your plan for me?" I believe that you captured that question in a very eloquent way. I think that most believers want to know the answer to that question. Good job.
Comment Written by JustisVita on 22-Jul-2015
The Future is So Bright,...? by Mike Stevens

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I enjoyed this humorous poem about the political situation that our country finds itself in. Politics is always fertile ground for humor. Good job.
Comment Written by JustisVita on 22-Jul-2015
Learning to Let Go by seewhatimwritingnow

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Wonderful poem about aging, and maturing. I have always loved the phrase, "from the cradle to the grave." Great writing based off of this phrase.
Comment Written by JustisVita on 22-Jul-2015
Scars by Ameraka
Chapter 3 of the book Spark into Flame

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This is a well written romantic chapter about a woman who is scarred from being abused by her father, but is able to overcome that with her lover, Ember. It captures the essence of an abuse victim's fears, and then her ability to conquer her fears, nicely. Good piece.
Comment Written by JustisVita on 22-Jul-2015
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