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Between Friends (Part-1 of 6) by Ric Myworld

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Very Strong writing my friend! I've always admired your writing style. I will try to read all six parts but my time is very limited because of my involvement with book clubs. I am closing my account here. Please stay in touch. www.owenspublishing.com
Comment Written by CEO2020 on 09-Aug-2020

Looking for Lucky by Ric Myworld

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Ric,

This story reminds me of your strong writing skills.

"Blood had slung in a rooster-tail stream against the wall. Glob at the top, two-thirds of the way to the ceiling, and splatters fanned out in a spray that spread larger as it cascaded down the wall. The giant, razor-sharp blade of the hunting knife lay on the floor."
Comment Written by CEO2020 on 11-Jul-2020

Unleashing Chaos by scongrove
Chapter 20 of the book THE CURSE

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I love the pictures. They make you feel the suspense of this thriller.

"As much as the Beast longed to sink his teeth into the human's flesh and rip out the physician's throat, something more important drove him forward. He dropped to all fours and bolted out of the room and made his way through a long corridor that led to the heart of the facility."

Awesome!
Comment Written by CEO2020 on 10-Jul-2020

Lucifer's Spell by scongrove
Chapter 13 of the book THE CURSE

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"You must save Arius... from Lucifer." He started to weep while struggling to keep his focus. "I love... you." Then, he closed his eyes and went limp, falling deeper into a state of unconsciousness. The fault of his son's destiny was his. To keep Arius from the hands of evil, Sebastian was willing to suffer a thousand-fold. Now his fate had come. The thing he had dreaded and feared long ago. His punishment was now a reality. Sebastian would be lost in the horrors of his childhood past, reliving each day he'd fought so hard to forget.

That's why I gave this piece six-stars.
Comment Written by CEO2020 on 21-May-2020

Out of the Shadows by scongrove
Chapter 12 of the book THE CURSE

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Your writing gets stronger with every piece you submit. I liked this post especially because of Steven. I connected spiritually with him in IMMORTAL.
This post features him and now I have connected with him emotionally. That is the art of a good writer - connecting the reader with the characters emotionally and spiritually - because if we can feel them, we can see them, and if we can see them, then the imagination is made real.
Excellent Work!
Comment Written by CEO2020 on 13-May-2020

The Task by scongrove
Chapter 29 of the book THE IMMORTAL

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If you have followed this series, you know each series has become stronger in writing and storytelling. The dialogue and imagery are very strong! The Author has grown as a writer without changing her style and I commend her for that. Chaos was excellent. I can feel Task is continuing the excellence.
Comment Written by CEO2020 on 01-Oct-2019

Blood Kiss by scongrove
Chapter 27 of the book THE IMMORTAL

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Ain't nothing but strong writing here and vivid detail. Example:

"She ran erratically, cutting sharp turns and weaving around trees, hoping to gain some distance. In her efforts to escape, she lost her footing on a broken branch and fell to the ground. Trembling with fear, she pushed herself up on her hands and knees. Forcing her eyes to look up, she came face to face with the wolfish fiend as it crouched before her. Its breath was warm against her skin and it smelled like rotting flesh."
Comment Written by CEO2020 on 15-Sep-2019

Forgiven by scongrove
Chapter 23 of the book THE IMMORTAL

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Apollyon started to smile, and then he found her mouth, kissing her. He held her even closer, next to his beating heart, which now belonged to her. Yelena made him feel alive in a way he had never been in his entire existence. Somehow, someway, he would find a way to keep his promise. Not only was he never letting go of his son, he wasn't letting go of Yelena either.

"Forever," he murmured against her lips.

EXCELLENT CLIFFHANGER!
Comment Written by CEO2020 on 19-Aug-2019

Full Moon by scongrove
Chapter 19 of the book THE IMMORTAL

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A continuation of previous exceptional works. I sent you a message. Please follow up ASAP and reply to my email address.

Congratulations
Comment Written by CEO2020 on 23-Jul-2019

Bloodshed by scongrove
Chapter 41 of the book Sins of Chaos

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CONGRATULATIONS!

I'm extremely happy 4 you! Your hard work has paid off. Excellent piece of artistry posted. I see Tessa Fairchild as a reflection of you.
Comment Written by CEO2020 on 07-Feb-2019


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