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Inmates to the Rescue! by lyenochka

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Lovely, lovely poem. Wonderful lesson, too, and all the more meaningful because it is true. Miss you. Trying to figure out how to give you member cent pumps but I think I fucked it up.

Marla
Comment Written by emptypage on 19-Feb-2019

Secrets Revealed by lyenochka

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Haha, it has probably happened. I'm terrified after some Alexa stories I've seen in the news, and she talks to me out of the blue from my Kindles, but I never hear what she says.

Here: "Who not when. I write the stock promotion article as Cy Kofant." Don't you need a comma after "Who"?
Comment Written by emptypage on 13-Jun-2018

The Dancer by Pamusart

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Ha. Very cleverly written, Pamusart. I really liked this. I could feel what these people felt. You carried me away better than Calgon ever could.

Really, nice job. The rhythm, the cadence? Excellent.
Comment Written by emptypage on 06-Jun-2018

Paulownia by lyenochka
Chapter 34 of the book Poems for Trees

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Very nice. I had no idea what these trees were called. I see them often. Or I did when I was able to go places.

You are very good at educating with rhythm and imagery. That dresser is freakin' awesome.
Comment Written by emptypage on 06-Jun-2018

Selfish? by Violet WolfChild

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I relate to this. Though I'm not certain to whom the narrator is speaking, I feel I could easily have spoken these words to my mother. She is dead now, and I don't miss her like my siblings do, but she wasn't the same with the.

Evocative.
Comment Written by emptypage on 29-May-2018

Oops Minor Accident by Sasha

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Ha! You fell??? I type with one finger always, so you must push on!

Really, I'm so sorry you are hurt. I'd heal you if I could. Get well soon...................................................love.
Comment Written by emptypage on 29-May-2018

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LOL, this is a wonderful story, dearest Helen. I love it. I mean, great dialogue only contest entry.

Fresh, wonderful, deserving of a win. You're on a hot streak.
Comment Written by emptypage on 29-May-2018

The Puppet Master Part 1 by Sasha

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This is excellent storytelling, Sasha. I'm in. Sucked in.

Stopping human trafficking is a cause I'm dedicated to, and have been for about four years because some nuns I know are very dedicated to the cause and informed me of what is happening right here in the USA. This story might not be about that... and that's okay. I'm along for the ride.
Comment Written by emptypage on 29-May-2018

My Mangled Cooking by Spitfire

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This is so damned funny and I just gave away my last six to Humpwhistle, so I'll hit you next week.

I haven't written anything in weeks. I'm too freaked out by a sick dog. But I'll be back.
Comment Written by emptypage on 25-May-2018

The Ink-Stained Affliction by humpwhistle

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What the frigatory? I was as baaaad as they came. I was required to register as a Text Offender.

Damn, boy, but you are funny. I like this very much. You get my last 6 of the week.
Comment Written by emptypage on 25-May-2018


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