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Dead and Gone by Meia (MESAYERS)

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Well done, mate.
I've missed your posts.
I LOVE the archaic language.
The Gothic lifestyle has always attracted me, although I've never had the guts to dress in any of their clothing
Comment Written by trumby on 21-Sep-2018

Pain: Part One by Phyllis Stewart
Chapter 1 of the book Pain

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vERY WELL written, mate.
A nice hook in the story, too, so that we stay interested and keep reading.
I like the story so far.
It sounds a bit like cancer to me
Comment Written by trumby on 18-Sep-2018

Guilty until Proven Inn -Chapter Six by Mustang Patty
Chapter 37 of the book Guilty Until Proven Innocent 2018

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Great ending.
I went over it several times. Let me just see if I got this right? Jill really isn't playing with a full deck and she actually IS guilty of murder. Just not the one that she was charged with. Am I right?
As I said before--- my brain damage has knocked me around a bit and I'm not very smart. Just persistent.
Comment Written by trumby on 17-Sep-2018

Circles by robyn corum

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Very subtle! Very creepy!
I had to read it twice to understand it.
Not like your usual offerings at all.
This is the type of story where you almost feel sympathy for the ghost. Or at least understand their point of view.
Comment Written by trumby on 17-Sep-2018

Oops! Were Stuck by country ranch writer

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I was a bit confused at one stage there about who was who, but, with only 75 words to tell the story, I can understand your brevity.
It may not rain much around here, but, when it does, we have a lot of country that goes underwater.
I'm glad that you took my advice about putting more money on your posts.
Comment Written by trumby on 17-Sep-2018

Plans Gone Aray by country ranch writer

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I'd LOVE a career like this. For a start off, I'd love to be a full time writer, then to have an excuse to hang around rodeos as well.
From what Dad says, most bull-riders (especially nowadays) are animals anyway, but I still like rodeos.
If you increase what your posts pay, you'll get more reviews.
Comment Written by trumby on 16-Sep-2018

Out To Lunch by Mastery
Chapter 13 of the book Shadows of Sin

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What can I say, mate? Great writing! Superbly written characters!
I get the impression that the senator is basically a man who likes to live large at his constituent's expense, but has been caught with his finger in one cookie jar too many.
I wouldn't be surprised at all if he had more skeletons in his closet than his wife.
He sounds a lot like the people that Cleve is trying to get away from in the Police force.
Congratulations on the book.
Comment Written by trumby on 16-Sep-2018

Best Seller On the Horizon by Mastery

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Congratulations, mate. This is every writer's dream.
As I've now got a dislocated shoulder that'll probably never heal good enough for me to go back to mowing and handyman work, (Or at least not as hard as I was working before) I'm also trying to get books published.
Comment Written by trumby on 16-Sep-2018

Sanitarium by Dean Kuch

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I'm glad to see that you've returned to your roots, mate.
Did these sounds come from one of the "Hostel" movies?
I'm afraid that my knowledge of movies of this nature are rather limited.
This is a well written poem though, and, if your goal was to give me nightmares, well done.
Comment Written by trumby on 16-Sep-2018

Guilty until Proven Inn Ch 5/Pt 12 by Mustang Patty
Chapter 36 of the book Guilty Until Proven Innocent 2018

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BRILLIANT!!!! As I said, my tastes in literature don't generally extend to courtroom dramas, but this is very good.
Do cases often get confessions this way?
From what I've heard, most cases are generally decided even before getting to court.
However, the only cases that I've ever been involved in have been to do with drunkenness and fighting, not big cases like this one.
Comment Written by trumby on 14-Sep-2018


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