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The Most Musical Apple by Ann Market

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Quite an interesting children's story here about a musical apple. Did the image bring the inspiration? Reading the title I thought it would be a Mac Computer or iPod. Haha
Good job with your story. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 29-Nov-2020

A Visit From Beyond

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Your short story was well written and concise. The story contains emotional polls which creates a need to finish reading. It is inviting and ends a sad story with a beautiful conclusion.
I recently moved to a new location that sits nestled in the woods and I have two Cardinals that visit every day. I often think of my parents and wonder if they are visiting. So the story meant a lot to me. Thank you for sharing. Good luck to the contest!
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 29-Nov-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Dark Night of the Soul

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What a wonderfully well written poem about mental illness and what can heal and that which hinders freedom. Allowing God to replace the pain is the best remedy one can obtain! Thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 29-Nov-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Winter's Here ! by Jannypan (Jan)

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Wow. Great job on your Nonet for this contest. I would like to know how you were able to use an apostrophe on this site without it being replaced by a bunch of other characters? Happens to me every time.
I didn't mean to steal away the attention from your wonderful writing! Your Nonet is excellent and tells a complete story in a few lines. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 29-Nov-2020

From Birth to Resurrection by fm wright

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You tell a complete story in only a few words with your well written words. Now for the sequel...
as a result of His Life, death, burial and resurrection, how did it change the course of your existence and eternity?
Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 29-Nov-2020

Treasured Moments by Mrs. KT

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Perfect photo to enhance this well written poem. I find these short forms a fun challenge and very interesting to read. Especially when they are done so well. Now I want to create a painting of a child in delight. Thank you for the inspiration!
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 29-Nov-2020

Lost in Time? by karenina

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You tell quite a story in your well written nonet and reverse nonet. This was my favorite portion:
"Hourglass
of sea sand,
gathered by winds
blown in from a storm."
Had me pondering about how it got in the hourglass.

Interesting piece.
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 08-Nov-2020

A Grain of Faith by Ideasaregems-Dawn

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What an interesting poetry form! You have complied with the 3-6-9 rule very well. It came out smoothly with an important message to boot! Way to go my friend. Good to find you here. :)
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 08-Nov-2020

haiku (patient eyes) by juliaSjames

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What an extraordinary piece of well written poetry, saying so much in very few words!
I enjoyed this so much. An emotional trigger is always an added bonus.

Question:
Are you Julian James of former years on Fanstory?
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 07-Nov-2020

The hidden fairy by Julie Sandy

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I think I'd love to know your daughter. I have painted fairies and created them as well. (I am at Fanart btw, as Jewell McChesney)
Recently an FB friend sent me a fairy doll that looks just like me!!
Oops! Haha now for this review....
This is a well written darling little poem. How fun it would be to illustrate and write a children's book about a fairy! Right? Maybe you should! Each stanza of a poem could go on a page. :)
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 07-Nov-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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