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Stagnation by Poetic Friend

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What a beautifully eloquent poem you've written here! I have observed many in this state of being. I am quite the opposite and one who thrives on change. Oddly enough!
What would you write about that? I'd love to see.
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 04-Jan-2021

Marital Bliss by Joanne Gill

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Aw! How special is this? I wonder how often this is the ongoing bliss. I actually hope more than we hear it is.
Good Senyru.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 31-Dec-2020
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How The Cowgirl Got Her Man by LisaMay

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I thoroughly enjoyed your entry in this contest. This is a very good subject and one that is applicable for throwing in some humor. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 31-Dec-2020
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(senryu) Just Hitched! by victor 66

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I found this contest to be quite fascinating and I can't wait to enter my own rendition! I married a fellow Fanstory member, myself going on five years this February. Never been happier. In fact, if he was still a member, I'd wonder if he wrote this. He says my humor is worth marrying again! ???

Congratulations
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 30-Dec-2020
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Sparkle by Suzanna Ray

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All That Jazz is a delightful number and so well done in the movie you describe.
Sparkle is a good way to describe it.
I have found this contest to be quite interesting.
Sparkle on...
Happy New Year!
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 30-Dec-2020

Jambo! by DonandVicki

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I would give the short story is shining six stars if I had an extra one left. This is an excellent write, full of intriguing imagery and delightful expression.
How long were you there? I'm sorry you had awkward silence with your friend that may have caused an uncomfortable trip.
Thank you for sharing your story with me. I really enjoy it.
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 30-Dec-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

New Year by Sanku

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Fun and dance over

morning brings

just a common day

How true it is. Back to our new normal? I hope not for long.
Good job.
Thank you for sharing.
Jewell
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 30-Dec-2020

Sunset Mystery by Lance S. Loria

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Being that The setting (and rising) sun appears to move across the horizon but the true mystery is that the earth rotates and the movement of the sun is only an illusion,
You have told the story well within the lines of your short poem.
Good stuff.
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 30-Dec-2020

Arctic Winter by AnnieDawn

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Wow! You have a true gift for teaching history with your writing. I found the facts to be fascinating in both the poem and the author's notes.
Who knew?
Great job
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 30-Dec-2020

A Nonet by Cass Carlton

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Wow! You have taken the poetry form and described it within the lines of a well written verse. How clever of you! I have always found this form fun to create. I think you've done a wonderful job with this and you put a smile upon my face too. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written by Poetic Visionary on 30-Dec-2020


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