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tanka (groping for water) by Sambangi

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I really like this one.
Yes it's true that despite our best efforts and planning that we can not predict what our future holds.
Sometimes I think it would be nice, but then again we wouldn't be where we are today if we could see.
Comment Written by CobiDawn on 11-Dec-2015

fog frozen on rose by Sambangi

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This is a very pretty 5-7-5 about a rose.
I like how you describe the ice melfing as the rose undressing
Beautiful image used as well.
Comment Written by CobiDawn on 11-Dec-2015

If Drinking Will Kill Me by Brett Matthew West
Chapter 52 of the book Reflections Of Color

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I'm fairly sure that anyone who has lived long enough has filled this way at some point in their life. I know I have.
I like how you say at the bottom it gets lonely. It makes me think of drinking an entire bottle and getting lost in it.
Comment Written by CobiDawn on 11-Dec-2015

Wait, I'm Busy Procrastinating by frogbook

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This is a super cute Entry on procrastination.
I'm so glad you were able to complete it.
The image is funny also. :)
Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written by CobiDawn on 04-Dec-2015
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Musical Cheer by krys123

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This is a fun palindrome entry.
Music is all the things you mentioned and more.
Perfect image also.
Good luck in the contest.

I love it.
Comment Written by CobiDawn on 04-Dec-2015

The 'R' by Tessa Kay
Chapter 18 of the book Fanpenciltastic

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As cute as all your other stories.
What was the name of that bush again?:)
Billy the pencil gets to go on all kinds of adventures.
Comment Written by CobiDawn on 04-Dec-2015

Requiem for What Could Have Been by frogbook

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I've had close friends that have been here. They turned to drugs to try to escape their mental anguish because they felt alone in the world. The problem with overcoming an addiction though is you have to make the choice and often times the feeling of that brief moment of escape is worth it. The same thing can and does happen with prescription meds. It is pure hell to go through, especially when those meds slow down your restless mind.
I wish you strength and I send my sympathies.
Comment Written by CobiDawn on 03-Dec-2015

I Come To Know The Beast by Raoul D'Harmental
Chapter 6 of the book The Scream

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This is my favorite by far.
I love all the others but this one especially stood out to me with the beautiful yet perfectly rhymed words chosen.
My favorite rhyme scheme is tumescence, essence, decadence, confidence.
Comment Written by CobiDawn on 03-Dec-2015

I Fight The Beast by Raoul D'Harmental
Chapter 5 of the book The Scream

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This is very creative. It makes me think of the struggles we face in our every day lives.
If you could attach an image to these troubles I imagine that they would be monstrosity's.
Comment Written by CobiDawn on 03-Dec-2015

Couples therapy by Michaelk
Chapter 10043 of the book Tiny Tales of Terror

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This one gave me the creeps but I am sure that this was your intention and it is well written just as are all your stories.
Comment Written by CobiDawn on 03-Dec-2015


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