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Work a breath at a time by Darlene Franklin

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Nothing wrong that I could see. Breathing is a conscience thing that we only pay attention to when something is wrong. I've never paid attention to whether I was breathing in or out when going to sleep. Made me think a bit. called2rite . reviewed on 10-16-19
Comment Written by called2rite on 16-Oct-2019

I Found Strength in the Rain by Nicole Hawley

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Very descriptive of the difficult times we all go through in this lifetime. No free passages in this Reviewed on 8-26-19 by called2rite.
Comment Written by called2rite on 26-Aug-2019

Forevermore by rspoet

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The reference to Dean's poems was woven in like tapestry. A good piece of artistry in writing showed. Death is definitely a forevermore. Reviewed on 8-26-19 by called2rite.
Comment Written by called2rite on 26-Aug-2019

The Lighthouse by Jeffrey L. Michaux

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This was a meaningful poem that spoke to me after a harrowing day. I like the fact that you brought out, there is always hope. Thank you for sharing this. called2rite on 5-15-19.
Comment Written by called2rite on 15-May-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Weighing Words by Chip Kuzborski

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Awesome writing. The etymology and meaning of words is interesting to me. The ability to speak life or death is power and people don't realize how it can effect people. called2rite.
Comment Written by called2rite on 15-May-2019

A Legend of Love by Pam (respa)

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Awe, so many times parents stand in the way of love. Is it experience or their own prejudices? A good story with a message of the truth of life in it. Written on 5-5-2019 by called 2rite.
Comment Written by called2rite on 05-May-2019

Stumblebum by tfawcus
Chapter 57 of the book The French Letter

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Interesting read. There was a lot of undercurrent things going on. I couldn't find anything wrong with it. It was well done. I do wonder what the mystery French letter was about. Called2rite on 5-3-19
Comment Written by called2rite on 03-May-2019

The Wall by Colin John

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You did a great job of genealogy of your ancestors. It was entertaining as well as factual. Comment made on 3-23-19 called2rite.
Comment Written by called2rite on 23-Mar-2019

Power of Words by IndianaIrish

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That is such a true statement. The etymology of words is so interesting and definitely captures the mind. A few words well-spoken does this. Comment made on 3-23-19 by called2rite.
Comment Written by called2rite on 23-Mar-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

My bed in the Clouds by Colin John

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I don't know what could be improved in this poem. A great tribute to your brother. The rhyming pattern was interesting. I don't know if there is a name for that. Comment made on 3-23-19 by called2rite.
Comment Written by called2rite on 23-Mar-2019


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