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A great life lesson shown through your writing. A reminder life should be a balance. The poem flows and rhymes well and is a joy to read thank you for sharing.

Comment Written by chcbeck on 26-Jan-2018

I All But Disappear by Bill McKenzie

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this and could feel the emotion through the voice of the poet. Some people never know what they mean to others and would be extremely humbled if they only knew. Great poem thanks for sharing.

Comment Written by chcbeck on 26-Jan-2018

A Loving Voice by poetwatch

Excellent

I agree with you that God shows his love through many ways but is always there. A nicely written poem a joy to read and eye-catching with the choice of imagery.

Comment Written by chcbeck on 26-Jan-2018

Bad Breath by NaughtieScribe

Excellent

A great short story great build up and humour. You manage to set the scene well through so little words. You can feel that calm before the storm of emotion. Good luck in the contest.

Comment Written by chcbeck on 26-Jan-2018

One Perfect Moment by Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I was gripped from start to end as I read your story. I can't ever imagine being so young and having to make such a painful decision based on my life so far.. It was nice to read that you now are able to have a relationship. Your style of writing is engaging.

Comment Written by chcbeck on 26-Jan-2018

When the fountain runs dry by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 56 of the book Potlatch Poetry

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem and reading about this style, it looks quite I complicated. I love the context and image chosen. I love poems which make you contemplate life great read thanks for sharing.

Comment Written by chcbeck on 25-Jan-2018

Just Work by Trudi Perkins

Excellent

A great poem and informative with both good points and bad of mental health. I have so much respect for any person who works supporting people, and love to hear how rewarding it can be. Great read thanks for sharing.

Comment Written by chcbeck on 25-Jan-2018

Sentimental Journey by June Sargent

Excellent

A lovely tribute to your father. Love the context and style of the poem. You can picture the dances the. A great nonet poem fitting the prompt perfectly.

Comment Written by chcbeck on 24-Jan-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Evil Spirits! by Commando

Excellent

A brilliant captivating read great descriptive language guiding you through. I know people who have mental health issues and refer to the demons in the mind. Your mind can be powerful enough to destroy your physical being. Great read thanks for sharing.

Comment Written by chcbeck on 24-Jan-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The Breakfast Club by Ricky1024

Excellent

A great story with great rhythm and flow. It hits home to me where people who have daily struggles with health, who don't take themselves seriously and need a friend to do normal things with. On the other hand how many people who go for breakfast sit in that restaurant with their own different stories to tell.

Comment Written by chcbeck on 24-Jan-2018