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Eric And Herbie Are Off Again! by sandramitchell
Chapter 1 of the book Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 4

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This was great Sandra, I just can't wait to see what Eric, Herbie and Gizmo discover on their new adventure. Oh and a thank you to your husband for the thought. It is a compelling dilemma indeed as to whether Atlantis truly does exist or not, a good choice, I eagerly await to read the coming chapters. Hugs and smiles Alie.
Comment Written by aryr on 16-Feb-2020

Maggot Mummy Is Happy by sandramitchell

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Yeaaaa for Cindy. I am so glad Sandra that Maggot Mummy was fixed and helped. You did rather well with this, it had a great rhyme pattern and definitely addressed the issues that Maggot Mummy. Well done. Hugs and smiles.
Comment Written by aryr on 15-Feb-2020

Rebelette and Puppy by Jannypan (Jan)

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What a great story Jan. It was perfect for the Pets event of Animal Crackers. I enjoyed reading about Rebelette and her baby Puppy. What a unique name, rather original. It is a shame that she just disappeared, hopefully one of the roofers had high hopes. Well done.
Comment Written by aryr on 15-Feb-2020

A Prologue by Pantygynt
Prologue of the book The Maid of the Mill

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A very catchy prologue J. I really enjoyed reading the activity involved as well as the narrative notes which explained the story. I enjoy both the history of the story as well as the sense of adventure behind it all. Well done.
Comment Written by aryr on 14-Feb-2020

C6 - A Little Trouble by Y. M. Roger
Chapter 6 of the book The Gardens at Weatherbury

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A very nice continuation chapter Yvette. It held a great deal of suspense in regards to the glow and wondering what was causing it. Then an equal sense of suspense when the discovery was made-imps. Rather enjoyable.
Comment Written by aryr on 14-Feb-2020

My Being Knows You by Y. M. Roger

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Good luck in the contest Yvette. Your words presented so much truth and a compelling sense of being able to reach out and touch someone. I loved the picture choice, it was very appropriate.
Comment Written by aryr on 14-Feb-2020

A Valentine Match by BeasPeas

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The picture was absolutely so very cute. Your words were definitely very true and the concept of an on line dating service being so inspiring were amazing. I enjoyed the sense of adventure this presented. Well done Marilyn.
Comment Written by aryr on 14-Feb-2020

Skunks don't care by Robert Zimmerman

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Good luck in the contest, Robert. I liked the way you put this together, which by the way meets the criteria. Great picture choice and your words are so so very true. Well done.
Comment Written by aryr on 13-Feb-2020

This is the FINAL CHAPTER! by sandramitchell
Chapter 12 of the book Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 3

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What a great completion to the story Sandra. It was great to see the mummified guards lift the lid, so Eric could place the ankh on the king and then be witness to the transition of the king. Then to discover that Noah was really Zig the son of Doizig, which truly explained a lot. You have done a great job with all three books and I am sure you will be around to have your wish come true. Very well done.
Comment Written by aryr on 09-Feb-2020

Pandemic to Cure World Overpop? by BeasPeas

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Wow, this was totally amazing Marilyn and so very true. It is a shame that world population got out of control. Unfortunately there are those that do not see one or two offspring as ideal, they are those that truly believe in God's word and that more are better. Perhaps the current health scare of the coronavirus is nature's means of regaining control. Very well done.
Comment Written by aryr on 09-Feb-2020


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