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Chapter Three part Eine by barbara.wilkey
Chapter 7 of the book Perennials of War

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Interesting and well written chapter.
I'd like to know if Ben is really being
watched.
Three German Shepherds! I would really
feel protected.

Dear Barbara I wish a very Merry Christmas
and a Wonderful New Year.
Comment Written by Bryana on 23-Dec-2016

For Egor and Frankie by thonnigford09

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I love dogs but see them go it's so very
painful' I had a dog for sixteen years and
died. I cried all weekend until my sons came
to me and made me realized he had to go but
he had a beautiful life with us.

I love your story.
Comment Written by Bryana on 08-Dec-2016

Settling In by Mastery
Chapter 31 of the book Falling Up The Stairs

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I hope Joey finally finds a place to be happy.
Mrs. Alexander or "ma" as the children call her,
seems to be much nicer than the previous foster
mother.
I like they way you describe the actions of the
children, specially Jimmy, I think he's going to be
Joeys friend.

A little early, but I wish you a wonderful weekend.
Comment Written by Bryana on 08-Dec-2016

No Bible, just BBL by LittleIrishman

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I'm sorry to say I'm not familiar with
the game of Cricket, seems Australians
really like the game.
I don't know about Cricket but I enjoyed
your writing, I will try to learn about it.

Comment Written by Bryana on 08-Dec-2016

Another wee Update by Ulla

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Hi Ulla,
Droughts are terrible, I live in a place where
we have too much rain, Seattle, Washington.
The summers are absolutely beautiful, but
in the winter rains almost every day, but we
have a beautiful state and cheap electricity.

I hope you don't have drought again and you
can plant your grapes and olives.

Un abrazo.
Comment Written by Bryana on 06-Dec-2016

Chapter Two part Zwei by barbara.wilkey
Chapter 5 of the book Perennials of War

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Hi Barbara, your story is very interesting, specially
when there are historic items involved. I would like
to know who really stole those items.

I will be waiting for your next chapter.
Comment Written by Bryana on 05-Dec-2016

The Outhouse by Teri7

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Excellent acrostic, very well written my friend.
An outhouse, I believe I used once and I'm glad
it was only one time, I don't have good memories
about it.
I wish you good luck.
Comment Written by Bryana on 05-Dec-2016

The History of Man by Kingsland
Chapter 5 of the book Mind Adventures

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Hi John,
You've written such a beautiful poem
about the history of man. It has an excellent
rhythm and flow, it was certainly a pleasure
to read it.
Comment Written by Bryana on 01-Dec-2016

53 - Jesus Teaches by MizKat

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Dear Kat, you poem is so beautiful and so true.
If we listen to Jesus we will have a nice life.
Not only you write so beautiful you also paint!
The picture is lovely.
Comment Written by Bryana on 01-Dec-2016

The Children's Home by Mastery
Chapter 30 of the book Falling Up The Stairs

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I'm Bryana........

I'm glad everybody is being nice to Joey, he has had such sad times.
It broke my heart when he asked about his brother, he just wanted
to be with him.
As always, excellent writing my friend.
Comment Written by Bryana on 01-Dec-2016


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