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I Sometimes Wish by MissMerri

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No I don't think you have a jealous bone either. Your poem sounds like wishful thinking without the nastiness! Your poem flowed well with good rhythm and rhyme. The last line is very poignant. MaggieF
Comment Written by MaggieF on 23-Jun-2017

contest (lookin' for the gate) by Grasshopper2

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Your poem flows well with great rhythm and rhyme and lots of alliteration. In loved 'haven't find the key, haven't find the door' suggests panic and blindly searching for something. MaggieF
Comment Written by MaggieF on 23-Jun-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

To Pay or Not to Play by kiwigirl2821

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Good picture. Gosh I've never thought of love like that but a lot of what you say rings true, harsh, but true. Your poem scans well with good rhythm and rhyme. I loved 'funnels and tunnels' very thought provoking. Maggie F
Comment Written by MaggieF on 23-Jun-2017

Watch Me Run by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 43 of the book Let's Laugh 6

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Good choice of picture. You really captured the essence of a pup in your poem. It flowed well with great imagery. I loved 'when all my paws are in the air' what a sight to see. Maggie
Comment Written by MaggieF on 23-Jun-2017

His Tonight by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 21 of the book Love Parts3

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Wow, very sexual and sensual (if my memory serves me well) it was beautiful and romantic too. Good rhythm! and rhyme and definitely good imagery, I might read it again!! Maggie
Comment Written by MaggieF on 23-Jun-2017

Nearing The End of The Road by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 18 of the book Love Parts3

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Good choice of picture. I'm sure the life of a trucker is very lonely, probably pays well but murder on their social life. Good rhythm and rhyme, you captured the feelings of the lonely truck driver. Maggie
Comment Written by MaggieF on 23-Jun-2017

The Salon by Dolly'sPoems

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Great picture choice Dolly, My two sisters go to the hairdressers every week! I don't. When I do I tell her to cut my hair short, shortly after she starts I panic and tell her to stop! You captured the atmosphere of the hairdressing salon. I know the last line wasn't exaggerated. Maggie x
Comment Written by MaggieF on 23-Jun-2017

Just Write by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 90 of the book World As I See It 6

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Like the picture. Anyone who reads your poem will run out of excuses, I think you got it all covered. Separating each suggestion into two lines each makes the suggestion very clear. There is nowhere to hide. Maggie
Comment Written by MaggieF on 23-Jun-2017

Love's Triangle by Dolly'sPoems

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Oh dear Dolly not a good situation to be in for any of them. I love the shape of your poem and 'one wears a blindfold' it could be any of them, the one whose being cheated on, trying to ignore it or either one who is doing the cheating, perhaps they are wanting to be blind to any hurt they are causing. Great stuff. Maggie x
Comment Written by MaggieF on 23-Jun-2017

Jekyll and Hyde Write Limericks by Marvin Calloway

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Ha ha, worth the effort. I particularly enjoyed Mister Hyde's limerick, it captured his personality with good rhythm. The different colour fonts works well. Maggie
Comment Written by MaggieF on 21-Jun-2017


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