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Machines of Bentley by Lance S. Loria

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I like the surprise ending. I am a little confused how a company could make that kind of money in that short of time. I do get the concept and the Machines name, but I just had trouble understanding what was actually going on until the end.
Comment Written by jusylee72 on 02-Mar-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
Invisible by rspoet

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This has such beautiful imagery. That we are afraid to speak, write , touch or create is invisible to the eye but still within our thoughts and memories. You portray it and illustrate it with true art. This is thoughtful and I truly enjoyed it.
Comment Written by jusylee72 on 02-Mar-2021
Yellow Butterflies by RGstar

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This is beautiful. I love the rhymes that feel effortless. It intrigued me from the start. I suspected abuse from the first verse before I read the explanation which tells me that you were able to portray what you wanted to with your words. Wonderful and well done.
Comment Written by jusylee72 on 02-Mar-2021
Food Choices by LJbutterfly

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Very good advice in a poetic menu of thoughts and tastes. Not too salty, not too sweet is my favorite line. Picture is a great illustration. I enjoyed this.
Comment Written by jusylee72 on 10-Dec-2020
Meditation Station by Jay Squires

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beneath the breathe is life. Interesting concept and beautiful illustration of your inner thoughts. Wishing you the very best as you continue to write.
Comment Written by jusylee72 on 10-Dec-2020
The Fat Man in Red by duchessofdrumborg

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Santa definitely wants to come to your house. You have offered him more than a treat. Good sense of humor in your poetry and picture words are used very well.
Comment Written by jusylee72 on 10-Dec-2020
The Winding Path by bnair

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Great use of the letters in Purpose. I truly get the meaning behind the words. Sounds like you are committed to learning and making life meaningful and purposeful. Great entry.
Comment Written by jusylee72 on 10-Dec-2020
The Reluctant One by JLR

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So darling. I can picture the reindeer with the mug and the Christmas smells in the room. Reluctant reindeer is a darling idea and the poetry is adorable. Love the picture. So Rudolph shine on.
Comment Written by jusylee72 on 10-Dec-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
Meaning of Life by Jordan Forde

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I like this but I think it needs a little work. I'm not sure I understand ghosts as memories for the future. It is an interesting concept but I just don't get it. You did get all the syllabic rhythms right and the picture is well thought out.
Comment Written by jusylee72 on 10-Dec-2020
Wells of bitterness... by royowen

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Beautiful thoughts and excellent subject. Your stanzas are clear and Mother Teresa is such a global and wonderful addition to this world. We can all learn from your poem and from giving. Great ideas inside of your head.
Comment Written by jusylee72 on 10-Dec-2020
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