God Whispers to Me a Life
What God whispers to me about a life. Pl read Author Notes
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Patricia L. Settoon

Toenail Stew by tfawcus

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Congratulations, you have certainly written to the objective of the assignment! Glad, I hadn't had dinner yet, this is as rotten as it gets. Good thing there is no smell that comes with it!
Keep it Up,




Comment Written by Patricia L. Settoon on 09-May-2018

Long days I languish by tfawcus

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Pure poetry on the page, excuse my play on words. Your words and phrases appearing from verse to verse make one feel the heartbreak that the writer is trying to have the reader travel with him. The thread is tight and so is the writing. Although, I knew it would not have a happy ending, I was still hoping it would! Excellent elegance on the page!
Comment Written by Patricia L. Settoon on 23-Mar-2016

I Wonder by WintyBoy

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Very thought provoking and deep. Makes one think about what comes before we were who we are.... Opening is spacial enough, but not too much, bringing it around before losing the reader in his/her wondering about if any little change in our life shift would have made us a completely different person. Brilliant, my dear, simply brilliant.
Comment Written by Patricia L. Settoon on 23-Mar-2016

Part I, Chapter 12 by teols2016
Chapter 12 of the book 2nd Time Around

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Great Job! Kept me involved throughout the chapter. With no other details to go on, this chapter really keeps the individual reader wondering will they really execute her and what has she done? Writing is neat, clear, and concise! Keep it up!
Comment Written by Patricia L. Settoon on 13-Mar-2016

Customs and Calendars by Liilia

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Very poignant and thought provoking on how different cultures measure time, and how we each see ourselves when looking back over our own lives. Great job of spacial openness in the first stanzas with opening your work up with the flow of how great and wide the world is with different cultures measuring time in a different ways, then bringing it in and narrowing it down to a very personal level. Genius, my dear. Bravo!
Comment Written by Patricia L. Settoon on 13-Mar-2016

Cornelia Can't Find Her Vest! by damommy
Chapter 2 of the book Cornelia's Red Vest

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Wonderful, rhyme scheme that flows throughout. Just long enough to keep young children involved in the story of where Cornellia's vest is and will be great lead into a discussion of where the vest it could be. Fabulous job! Can't wait to read your other poems!
Comment Written by Patricia L. Settoon on 13-Mar-2016

Snow Flakes Glow In The Clouds by danpald

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Unbelievable imagery! Using your words to paint photos in the readers' minds. What a treat for your audience to hear you read this to them. The flow of the poem moves easily from one stanza to the next, making the transfer at an easy and enjoyable pace. A delightful read! Keep up the great work.
Patricia L. Settoon
Comment Written by Patricia L. Settoon on 28-Feb-2016

The Devil's Jewel by Spiritual Echo

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What a wonderful story, it captures the reader's interest at the very beginning and continues its thread of very descriptive visual imagery. Wow! I can picture that grandchild enraptured, sitting at his grandfather's feet just waiting for the story to unfold. You have us captivated in a very unique way. A very interesting read. Go girl Go!
Comment Written by Patricia L. Settoon on 28-Feb-2016

Honest and not many masks. by robina1978

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Great start, but then sort of fell off there. Is there a medical issue that prevents you from focusing? Good luck with your writing.
Comment Written by Patricia L. Settoon on 28-Feb-2016

Recollections. (2) by write hand blue

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Absolutely fabulous! This poor child only trying and not succeeding very well to please his mom. Many parents are not aware that at a young age their children are not able to understand each direction they want them to know and follow. Hilarious now! Hopefully, you are putting these down in a book. It will be fantastic! Keep writing! Patricia L. Settoon
Comment Written by Patricia L. Settoon on 28-Feb-2016


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