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Fade to Dust by Dolly'sPoems

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Your poem speaks a definite truth, we all need to be loved. If we are left alone we all fade away by ourselves. It seems to be the way we were made; to be with others and have companionship. When people lose hope, they lose the desire to live, this is an obvious correlation that evidence bears out. Great poem and wonderful point you made.
Comment Written by Cmelton on 16-Apr-2018

Sorrowful Days by Dolly'sPoems

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This is a very emotional poem but one in which you can sense a lot of feeling. You made a great choice of words and the rhyming scheme is wonderful. I really loved this poem and will definitely keep on reading.
Comment Written by Cmelton on 16-Apr-2018

The Craven by pome lover

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You really wrote a very nice and witty piece here. I like the internal rhyme scheme and the very nice wit. You did a beautiful job and I can't wait to read more. Keep on writing and I will keep on reading.
Comment Written by Cmelton on 16-Apr-2018

Loves Sweet Summer Roses by Dolly'sPoems

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Beautifully written and great rhyming scheme. You have captured so much in this little poem that it is a great read. I always enjoy reading your poems and of course you did another wonderful job with this poem.
Comment Written by Cmelton on 16-Apr-2018

Oliver Twist in Rhyme - 15th Helping by Dolly'sPoems

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Great job narrating the story in a poem while still being able to rhyme. That truly is a feat in and of itself. You did a really good job and must have been awfully inspired to try and even accomplish the task. Great job on a well written poem.
Comment Written by Cmelton on 16-Apr-2018

Haiku (poetry gives birth) by rjuselius

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This is a nice Haiku and it sound really god when you read it aloud. I like the words you chose and how well you wrote this poem. I wish you luck in the contest and think you have a good chance of winning.
Comment Written by Cmelton on 16-Apr-2018

The hands of time by dmt1967

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Nice little poem. It is really short and sweet. I like how you begin and end the poem so quickly but really cover a whole lifetime. Great job and I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Cmelton on 16-Apr-2018

Foreplay by Michael Steinert

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This is a very humorous peace that is well done. I like the rhyming and the point you have made with such little words. You are truly and artist to be able to fit so much into such a small space. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Cmelton on 09-Apr-2018
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Close Your Eyes by Tootie

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This is a wonderful poem with a strong sense of love as well as a great rhyming scheme. I love rhyming poetry most of all because it give you a feeling that normal poetry just can't do. You have done a wonderful job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Cmelton on 09-Apr-2018

Spring's Transition Took on Spite by Joy Graham
Chapter 9 of the book Na-Po-Wri-Mo 2018

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I feel your pain. Every week in Michigan I hope we will have some warm weather but then every Wednesday-Friday it snows. I swear we have had 8 months of winter. This is a great poem and you have chosen your words perfectly. Good job.
Comment Written by Cmelton on 08-Apr-2018


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