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Ireland Dear Ireland by Lordinajamjar

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Very descriptive, maybe a bit over-the-top? Regardless a very good read. Thank you for posting and sharing. Very memorable and a great tribute to the land and people of Ireland.
Comment Written by Caveman1 on 25-Mar-2019

Quicksand for Angel! by Commando
Chapter 4 of the book Angel in the Meadow!

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I see why you are the 20th ranked author on FanStory. You are a very talented writer. There's no doubt, I will be reading more or your writings in the near future.
Comment Written by Caveman1 on 22-Sep-2018

Goodbye forever... by Hitcher

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Very well illustrates the science completely. I just can't how this short piece is written. It tells a back story, middle and what's to come. Awesome job!
Comment Written by Caveman1 on 26-Sep-2017

My First Big Date by Walu Feral
Chapter 13 of the book The One They Call Feral 2

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I enjoyed reading very much. The deep plot and the immerse dialogue into your scenes are kick butt. I look forward to reading more of your writing works. Keep on writing!
Comment Written by Caveman1 on 13-Sep-2017

Joe Speaks by sandramitchell
Chapter 14 of the book This Time - That Time 2

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Very well organized and written. I enjoyed reading about all the different colorful characters. The plot appears to be easy to follow;therefore, the readers will not get lost in your story line. The writer is completely enthusiastic about triggering the reader's curiosity about the endless wonders of time travel.
Comment Written by Caveman1 on 13-Sep-2017

Foglifter by DonandVicki

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Very well written. The short flash style plot and characters well thought out. I really enjoyed reading this short piece. Nothing can stop true love for another person.
Comment Written by Caveman1 on 12-Sep-2017

Chapter Dreizehn part vier by barbara.wilkey
Chapter 44 of the book Perennials of War

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Very well written piece of historical fiction. I could not seem to find any misspellings. My grammar skills are not that great yet, but I did not find any errors in terms of grammar. Word usage seems to be your strong suite. I enjoyed very much reading this chapter of your book. Please by all means keep on being creative and write more!!!
Comment Written by Caveman1 on 12-Sep-2017

My old mate Tex by JessicaLee12

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So true to life the words from poem flow so true to life. I personally don't care for poetry. But find your poem a great read. In Ottawa, IL USA we just had a bikers' brawl between the Hell's Angels and the Outlaws. Take care and stay safe when writing about the dangerous characters of life.
Comment Written by Caveman1 on 11-Sep-2017

My Island Life - Part 2 by Aiona
Chapter 2 of the book Island Life

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This scene was a lot more humorous to me. I don't enjoyed reading the second scene. This was a very entertaining read.
Comment Written by Caveman1 on 11-Sep-2017

My Island Life - Part 1 by Aiona
Chapter 1 of the book Island Life

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I don't much about proper script writing, but the format looks perfect in terms of the script format. As for the humor? Of course I imagined that laughs from the audience during the funny parts. But for some reason I did not fun this scene that humorous. I think you can do better on finding some better humor in this scene. It has the base for few great laughs. What I can not exactly you give. Maybe that the driver bought his gun to his previous employment and his former employer didn't think he had the right to bring a hand gun to work? I don't know. I am not funny writer myself, maybe funny to look at though. Take care. I will keep reading the future scenes. Just remember opinions and backsides everyone has one. So if you don't like what I write please my all means fully ignore. Best wishes.
Comment Written by Caveman1 on 11-Sep-2017


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