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If The Walls Could Hear by Gypsy Blue Rose
Chapter 15 of the book 2016 5/7/5 POEMS

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Quite a spooker right before I crawl into bed...
The picture is also eerily disturbing- just enough creep factor to make me itchy. Well done Sister Ninja xo
Comment Written by Lisa Deverick on 20-Dec-2016

Room with a View by bichonfrisegirl

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Nice 3 line 5-7-7 poem. A melancholy sight for sure. When I used to work in the hospital, I would work 12 hour shifts. I would go in at dark, and leave after dark. I remember watching seasons fade from patients rooms- this reminded me of that.
Comment Written by Lisa Deverick on 23-Sep-2016

There Are Some Days by patcelaw

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Hello Patricia... whether a widow or surrounded by people, many of us know too well the feeling of loneliness. You worded this well to express your feelings (Here is a hug) I love you friend- and I care! :)
Comment Written by Lisa Deverick on 23-Sep-2016

Saved From The Electric Chair by patcelaw

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You did a good job in finding the humor in your dilemma. We get calls like yours quite frequently. I am sure they were happy to help you out. I have been at a retirement community twice this week already for a lady that keeps falling out of her new hover chair... my suggestion- keep a cane next to your chair for some added support. Have a wonderful day friend! Stay healthy!
Comment Written by Lisa Deverick on 23-Sep-2016

Love's Fragile Blossoms by MissMerri
Chapter 25 of the book

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This love poem of yours is so eloquently written. A very ladylike Shakespearean sonnet that is a pleasure to read. Delicate yet strong. Lovely.
Comment Written by Lisa Deverick on 23-Sep-2016

Babes of Hades by Dean Kuch

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That Book of Revelation is a scary one... this is a very interesting take on the image of Hell, and the torment waiting for those who side with the sinners instead of the saints... well done.
Comment Written by Lisa Deverick on 22-Sep-2016

The Awakening by tfawcus

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As usual, I enjoy the eloquence you always emit with your words.
You have painted a beautiful scene in the first stanza, and a very romantic
scene in the next. I like the last line's humor.
Comment Written by Lisa Deverick on 22-Sep-2016

3/7/3 haiku ( spirit soars ) by Gypsy Blue Rose
Chapter 29 of the book 2016 GYPSY's HAIKU

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This is amazing! Your art and your notes take me there on this literal journey!
You are an artist both with your words and also with your pictures. I enjoyed this very much Sister Ninja!
Comment Written by Lisa Deverick on 07-Sep-2016

horror haiku (her musty earth scent) by Gypsy Blue Rose
Chapter 12 of the book Hora haiku (Horror haiku)

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And the PLOT thickens... LOL (as in earth plot for a grave)
That musty earth scent is so deeply set that perfumes just won't cover it!
I'm loving where this story is going- keep it up!
Comment Written by Lisa Deverick on 27-Aug-2016

Love's Sweet Kiss by I am Cat

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Oh- I know your pain! I am sorry for your loss... it sucks. Dogs are the best friends. Sounds like Stormy lived a good life surrounded by love. This is a beautiful sonnet you have written in her memory.
Comment Written by Lisa Deverick on 27-Aug-2016


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