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Tell Me How You Love Me by MissMerri

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A Beautiful Love Poem as fresh as the morning mist of forest greenery.

An excellent flow, without hesitation, of poetry in motion from beginning to end.

As fresh and beautiful as the dew in an early morning rose garden.
It.s a "Ten".
Well done Lady "M"...Very Nice...Quantum Traveler...Phil.

Comment Written by Quantum Traveler on 14-Apr-2019

spring whispers by judester

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A Beautifully portrayed Image.

An Excellent verse where one can feel a gentle zephyr carrying the scent of the pines throughout the forest as songbirds tell secrets through songs in a language all there own.

This is a "SIX" but I'm not allowed a rating over Five according to my rating chart.

Outstanding piece of Poetic Art...Quantum Traveler...Phil.
Comment Written by Quantum Traveler on 09-Apr-2019

Bird On a Broken Bough by MissMerri

Excellent
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Well Lady "M" it has been a while but couldn't resist commenting on this extraordinary work of artistic art.

Your Image sets the tone for this beautifully penned poem.
The color of matting syncs well with Image and Verse.

An exquisitely told story about one's journey in life.

Your Poetry in Motion flows smoothly from beginning to end.

It's a "SIX" but I'm not allowed to to give any more than a "Five" I guess according to my rating chart.

Excellent Lady "M"...Very Well Done...Quantum Traveler...Phil.


Comment Written by Quantum Traveler on 09-Apr-2019

Old FanStory Friends by susand3022

Excellent
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An Excellent Image for a Skillfully written poem for lost FanStory Friends.
I'm still a reader and enjoy the artistic poetry of those who continue to write and post.
There are many reasons why many have left.
Thanks for this enjoyable post.
I wish you well in the contest...Quantum Traveler...Phil.
Comment Written by Quantum Traveler on 04-Apr-2019

Secrets of a Leaf by Zinnia48

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I find your depth of perception Caroline very exquisite.
You have the ability to see within the existence of a simple leaf and feel the transformation and essence of a living entity.
You write with a compassionate love and artistic feeling that paints a canvas with the essence of Mother Nature.
Your Imagery and Matting Colors are Outstanding for this Beautifully written verse.

Well Very Portrayed...Q.T...Phil.
Comment Written by Quantum Traveler on 12-Sep-2018

Fan Story Crazy by Hugh McDowell

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Brilliant Imagery for this writing.
Excellent Visual context throughout this writing where one can be a part of the landscape...experience the inner emotion and applaud the humorous and dramatic ending.
A Mini-Story Masterpiece.

Excellent...Q.T...Phil.
Comment Written by Quantum Traveler on 08-Sep-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

As the Wind Blows Free by Mrs. KT

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Excellent Imagery for this Outstanding piece of Literary Art.

The rhyme and flow is exceptional and beautifully portrayed in simple language that resonates in detail an escape from the ties that bind.

A Masterful writing beautifully portrayed through Poetry in Motion.

An Excellent Presentation...Q.T...Phil.
Comment Written by Quantum Traveler on 25-Aug-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

When Walking with Children by Debbie Pope

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Your Image Debbie sets the scene for a delightful poem.

You have captured a stage setting where one can engage in the moments of fun and laughter visualizing each event that is portrayed in each verse.

One can see...feel...and...laugh at all the playful elements right down to the Smushy...Gooey...Squishy Mud between wiggly toes.

An Excellent Portrayal of Visionary Writing

Well Done...Q.T...Phil.
Comment Written by Quantum Traveler on 20-Aug-2018

no second chance by judester

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Outstanding Judester.

This Contest Entry is filled with so much Essential, Visionary, Underlying, Subjective Matter that one's imagination can run wild with anticipation waiting for the next chapter to this "Cliffhanger".

I can envision the colors...the sights...the sounds...along with the activity of the whole neighborhood.

Excellent portrayal of imaginative writing.

Well Done...Cheers...Q,T...Phil.
Comment Written by Quantum Traveler on 18-Aug-2018

The Color of Tears by ciliverde
Chapter 25 of the book Not Sure Yet

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Well Carol I know this Creek very well having lived in Montana for eleven years it reminds me on the winter of 1978-1979 one of the worst winters in Montana history when they had to dynamite the Missouri River to keep the ice from lifting up the bridges.

This is a brilliantly penned in-depth portrait of ones beautiful exterior that shields the tormenting flow of a dark abyss that lies beneath the beauty of creation.

An Excellent writing with such a great depth of character.

Very Well Portrayed...Q.T...Phil.
Comment Written by Quantum Traveler on 14-Aug-2018


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