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Some dandy lyin' by djeckert
Chapter 14 of the book contest entrys

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I love the spelling and wording. I am a little concerned on what the last sentence is trying to state. other than that I love it great job. Keep up the good work! :)
Comment Written by mitc66 on 03-Jun-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Looking Back by brownies

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I love the picture, it really brings the story together. Also, I love you wording and spelling, it was on point. I love how you expressed the feelings in a rhyming way. The only problem I have with this is i am not sure what reassesses means, but other than that I LOVE it. Great job. Keep up the awesome work! :)
Comment Written by mitc66 on 03-Jun-2016

Don't Mess With A Witch by prettybluebirds

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I love the details and this story brought a smile to my face! All though, I didn't quite get what you meant by "He must have tied one on again last night." You did a GREAT job on wording and spelling and you made me laugh in about every sentence.
Comment Written by mitc66 on 03-Jun-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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