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The Old Rope Swing by MissMerri

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Excellent poem! I really liked how you took a childhood experience and applied it to life as you got older. What a great idea. Like, like, like!
Comment Written by Mama Fish on 16-Aug-2016

goodnight by Leonasewali

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Interesting poem about not being able to sleep. A bad case of insomnia or was it truly because of fear there was no sleep.Good job on the rhymes, even though the poem was not laid out in poetic lines.
Comment Written by Mama Fish on 16-Aug-2016

Season's end by An Awakened Heart

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Nice job on getting the mood across of a broken heart. If this was your experience, I I am sad to hear about it. Nice poem overall.
Comment Written by Mama Fish on 16-Aug-2016

My Little Joy by Teri7
Chapter 17 of the book Greyson

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Great poem about your little Greyson! I have 11 children and now am onto grandchildren. They are all such a blessing. Thank you for reminding me of the simpleness of children!
Comment Written by Mama Fish on 16-Aug-2016

Never Get Enough by nomi338

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Good job with your rhyming scheme. Sad that drug addiction is so prevalent and has such a grasp on many folks. Is this a personal poem that you have experienced?
Comment Written by Mama Fish on 16-Aug-2016

Be A Tree by patcelaw

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Nice poem and comparison. Good questions to ask of each other. Good job.

Yeah, it would be better to be more than firewood!
Comment Written by Mama Fish on 12-Aug-2016

Forever closer to you by DR DIP

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Very romantic and lovely romance poem. I have been married to the same man for almost 30 years and this is what our relationship is like.
Comment Written by Mama Fish on 08-Aug-2016

The Lesson (haibun) by jlsavell

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This is a perfect example of the freedom of poetry. Write and speak whatever is on your mind. This is what I tell my kids when I teach them. Poetry is freedom to express yourself. Good job.
Comment Written by Mama Fish on 07-Aug-2016

A now view by heyetpoet

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Good Cinquain poem, following the rhythm of the Cinquain. I'm not into Hillary at all, but your poem follows the correct pattern.
Comment Written by Mama Fish on 07-Aug-2016

My Father by Kyanro

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Wow! What an amazing story. Very nice job on expressing the intense emotion with such an event. The author notes make this poem all the more interesting.
Comment Written by Mama Fish on 07-Aug-2016


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