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Thomas Bowling

Tina and Larry by Mastery
Chapter 3 of the book The Deceivers

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An interesting client. He seems intelligent. I wonder why he didn't contact the credit card company and dispute the charges and replace the card? That should have been his first step.
Comment Written by Thomas Bowling on 29-Jun-2020

Destroying the Duke by judiverse

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Good grief, when is it going to stop? They are coming after George Washington and Abraham Lincoln. White guilt has reached it's limit. It's time for white pride.
Comment Written by Thomas Bowling on 28-Jun-2020

Ramblin' Jack's Band-Part 2 of 3 by humpwhistle

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Your story is very imaginative and filled with interesting characters as usual. I sense another homer in the making. I look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written by Thomas Bowling on 28-Jun-2020

The Beast by Bobby Cunningham

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This is an excellent portrait of going through a hurricane. My wife and I had just moved into our new home when hurricane Charlie hit. When I built our house, I put disappearing sliders in our living room. The eye of the storm passed over our house. I kept a close watch on the disappearing sliders (the most vulnerable area).

As the wind was at it's highest, my wife walked to the doors and started to unlock them. I shouted, "STOP!) If the doors go, the whole house will blow away.
Comment Written by Thomas Bowling on 28-Jun-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

American Police Officer by Willie P. Smith

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I don't understand why anyone would want to be a police officer these days. Trying to stop crime could land you in prison. Is it really worth it tod o such thankless job?
Comment Written by Thomas Bowling on 28-Jun-2020

Echoed thoughts... by royowen

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I guess one day I'll really know, indeed as I am known.

We all say we want this, but do we really? The Bible says That which was done in secret shall be shouted from the house tops. That will be frightening.
Comment Written by Thomas Bowling on 28-Jun-2020

Unrequited Love by Spitfire

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This reminds me of the dove that was smitten by cupid's arrow and married a crow. Soon, she was disgusted by his habits. He said, "You knew I was a crow when you married me."
Comment Written by Thomas Bowling on 27-Jun-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The Waistline Wave, a Limerick by judiverse

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My wife and I went to the supermarket to buy bread flour. They were sold out. Likewise yeast. I couldn't even find any online. A lot of people stayed home and baked.
Comment Written by Thomas Bowling on 26-Jun-2020

My Favorite Things in June by robyn corum

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My favorite part of June was when we were twelve, my cousin and I sold apple cider by the road. Our fathers made a fifty gallo0n barrel of cider and moved it to the roadside. As the month wore on, the cider started tasting funny. Before long, we were too drunk to sell it.
Comment Written by Thomas Bowling on 26-Jun-2020

The Dwelling Place by Suzanna Ray

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So, you're moving into my childhood home. It's not so bad if you don't mind rats and spiders. Some of them won't bite. Good luck in the contest. I hope you win and split the money with me.
Comment Written by Thomas Bowling on 25-Jun-2020


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