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Seventy, Sixties Something by RGstar

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Another brilliant piece of yours, RG. Travelling back in time to songs that made sense and meant something. Music is healing and leading us to a better place. The poem is very smooth, calm and refreshing. Yes, we are One. No matter of our wealth, colour or tongue, like Imagine by John Lennon. Delightful and bright descriptions make this piece an outstanding one. Like the moon kissed the sun. All the best, my dear friend. Ella
Comment Written by Ella25 on 22-Mar-2017

Our blue print by Jackarrie

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It is a fascinating concept and beautifully presented, Mary. The baby in the womb is a real miracle. So precious and protected. A blueprint of life. Well done. Best luck in the contest. With love, Ella
Comment Written by Ella25 on 22-Mar-2017

haiku (empty swing) by IndianaIrish
Chapter 14 of the book Haiku Club Challenge Multi-Author

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Playgrounds are bare, no laughter and smile there...the wind pushes the swings on a rainy day. It is a very lovely written haiku. I picture those empty swings and children sitting quietly in the classrooms. Autumn leaves dancing in the rain. Well done, my friend. With love, Ella
Comment Written by Ella25 on 22-Mar-2017

Hot stuff by Jackarrie
Chapter 28 of the book Poetry

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Excellent contest entry poem, Mary. The flow is great, the rhyme and the theme, amazing. The story of Donna and the disco is superb and the image fantastic. Thank you for sharing. Best luck in the contest. With love, Ella


Comment Written by Ella25 on 22-Mar-2017

haiku (at the road's bend) by Sis Cat
Chapter 15 of the book Haiku Club Challenge Multi-Author

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Another beautifully written haiku, Andre. The image exquisitely expresses the words. The message is clear; this is what humans do to nature. Litter and destroy as the glass in the hot sun can start the fire. Excellent work. Blessings, Ella
Comment Written by Ella25 on 22-Mar-2017

Atomic Renga by Sis Cat

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It is a beautiful poem. Very well-written and enjoyable to read. What had happened with the atomic bomb that landed on Hiroshima is hard to take as many innocent people lost their lives or terribly suffered in pain. The flow of the poem is smooth, and it is easy to understand. The comments are provoking and insightful. The image speaks on its own. Excellent co-work. Blessings to both, Ella
Comment Written by Ella25 on 22-Mar-2017

Blood and Guts! by Commando

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Bill, I can't imagine what you all went through. The battles you fought and blood that was shed. You wrote a wonderful story of soldiers who lost their lives while others were deeply wounded. You have done so much for America in a winning way, fighting terrorists, enemies of the world. Thank you for sharing and helping me to understand what goes out there. Excellent piece. Best luck in the contest. Respectfully, Ella
Comment Written by Ella25 on 22-Mar-2017

Betrayal by Ulla

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The Lanturne poetry, something new to me. The betrayer thinks the victim is naive and not going to find out what happened. It is a form of abuse/shattering trust not so easy to build again as trust takes years to gain but minutes to destroy. I love the Irises as they are gentle flowers that open up so quickly. Best luck in the contest. With love, Ella
Comment Written by Ella25 on 22-Mar-2017

haiku(crimson leaves) by Ulla
Chapter 14 of the book Haiku Club Challenge Multi-Author

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The image speaks for itself and the poem at the same time. So beautifully striking. A bouquet of art. In such short words, you spelt it all. The whole story of fallen leaves. Excellent. With love, Ella
Comment Written by Ella25 on 22-Mar-2017

I Love The Fuji by Ulla

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And Fiji it is. Not my favourite type but we all know apples are healthy in fact. Very well done, my sweet friend. Love the image of Fiji mount. Best luck in the contest. With love, Ella
Comment Written by Ella25 on 22-Mar-2017


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