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The Forgotten Valley Part Three by Ulla
Chapter 3 of the book The Forgotten Valley

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A very well written story, your journey to Spain. Moving is not easy, especially to another country. There is so much you want to take and so little room to fit all that. Thank you for sharing your lovely story. With love, Ella
Comment Written by Ella25 on 22-Mar-2017

I Survived the Storm by pharp

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God is our umbrella when it rains on us, and He carries us when we journey through the storm. You are a beautiful and strong woman sweet Portia. Sometimes the most powerful women are the ones who love beyond all faults, cry behind closed doors, and fight battles that nobody knows about, and we survive. It is an exquisite poem, pinned from your precious heart. We are in the hands of a Powerful One. He will never let us down. Bravo. I miss you my friend. With love, Ella
Comment Written by Ella25 on 22-Mar-2017

Quiz #4 by Ulla
Chapter 4 of the book Get To Know Me!

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Hi, Ulla. Similar interest in cooking and dancing. I love the image you have chosen to support your life story.Beautiful hummingbirds. Great answers and thank you for letting us know more about you. With love, Ella
Comment Written by Ella25 on 22-Mar-2017

haiku(diffused light) by Ulla
Chapter 15 of the book Haiku Club Challenge Multi-Author

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It is a beautiful haiku, Ulla. The image is striking like you there, walking in the forest and feeling the warmth of the sun, shining through the trees. Beautiful. The words crest the image. Excellent work. With love, Ella


Comment Written by Ella25 on 22-Mar-2017

Haiku (tulips take charge) by pharp

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It is a breathtaking haiku, sweet Portia. The image is striking and vibrant like you there, almost touch the tulips. Shake the snow away to protect its beauty. Beautiful, amazing. The words crest the image. Superb work. With love, Ella
Comment Written by Ella25 on 22-Mar-2017

Butterfly Romance by Irish Rain

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It is such a lovely poem...a butterfly romance. Very soft, gentle touches in superbly flowing banquette of words. The image adds the beauty to the whole creation. Dancing with grace in butterflies love. Exquisite. All the best in the contest. With love, Ella

Comment Written by Ella25 on 18-Mar-2017

haiku (kids cannonball) by IndianaIrish
Chapter 13 of the book Haiku Club Challenge Multi-Author

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I imagined children playing at the lake, rope swinging, water splashing, having fun. What an excellent haiku story in such short words. Bravo. No, didn't need a supporting image as I pictured it all naturally. Beautiful. With love, Ella

Comment Written by Ella25 on 18-Mar-2017

haiku (hand-shaped leaves) by Sis Cat
Chapter 14 of the book Haiku Club Challenge Multi-Author

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I imagined autumn leaves dancing in the wind, banging on the door wanting to come in with the winter coldness right behind them. Great appearance of words, very exquisite ....Winter stalking the autumn. Brilliant. Excellent haiku story in such short words Andre. All the best, Ella
Comment Written by Ella25 on 18-Mar-2017

Sally - Part Twenty-Two by Ulla
Chapter 22 of the book Sally

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Another great chapter Ulla. I truly enjoy the story of Sally and her dead, abusive husband. Who did kill him if she didn't? Can't wait for another one, my friend. With love, Ella
Comment Written by Ella25 on 14-Mar-2017

Bongo & Jackson's Woman by Ideasaregems-Dawn

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Dawn, the story is fantastic. How did you come up with the idea or did it happen? I haven't noticed any mistakes, flows smoothly and very engaging. Best luck in the contest. With love, Ella

Please excuse me for being late with some review. I am working on publishing my book as well many other things.
Comment Written by Ella25 on 14-Mar-2017


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