AmaZing Animals - E
Chapter 5 of the book AmaZing Animals
I love the poem at the beginning, and the information about eagles is excellent.
I have a few suggestions:
The line, "While these eagles are big, the female is bigger." I'd change to "While these eagles are big, the female is larger than the male."
The line, "They share the building of the nest" seems awkward. Perhaps "They build the nest together."
Finally, "Apparently, Benjamin Franklin wanted the wild turkey!" is a good historical fact, but it needs a better introduction. "While
Benjamin Franklin wanted the wild turkey, the other founding fathers agreed the eagle would be a better symbol of America."
This is a good addition to your book.
Comment Written by Jake P. on 07-May-2020