Football Chapter 11 part 3
Katherine shares a glimpse of her previous life.
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What pours from her by Meia (MESAYERS)

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Excellent as always. So enjoy how you offer information to the reader after the poem. So much always to learn about this place we call earth. Now I have to go look up both women to refresh my memory. Me, oh my!

Enjoyed reading the poem.

Blessings, Jo
Comment Written by JoAnn Forsberg on 25-Jan-2017

New Book by rockinm76233

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So true, so true, so true. Excellent words for visualization in a poem. I like getting lost in a new book especially on history or theology. To learn something new, expand the mind.

Blessings, Jo
Comment Written by JoAnn Forsberg on 25-Jan-2017

Life is Flash Fiction... by rama devi

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There's that beautiful smile! It is the first thing I notice when I come to read any of your poems. I like how you use the bus ride as the symbol. We often talk about life being a ride, yet, rarely does anyone break it down into a visual. A bus is an excellent visual.

That bus recognition that naturally allows us to assume there are others riding along side you. That visual of a person in reflection, as you sit in a seat and watch the endless, often mundane, scenery going down the road to a destination.

Some believe life is only great if it's sports car ride. Yet, truly depth of life is more like a bus ride.... which can hold many wonders unfolding in it's simplicity.

Appreciate you greatly. Blessings, Jo
Comment Written by JoAnn Forsberg on 16-Jan-2017

The Haunting of Jim Squire by Meia (MESAYERS)

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Very haunting, as a woman who was born in the 1950's, I remember the stigma as I heard whispers about young pregnant women. As tough as life is still today, society still has come along way.

One reason I love words like others love candy is they awaken within me emotions I do not normally feel within the routine of life. I think it is why I so enjoy your writings. You have the gift of a well crafted box of candy for another to open and enjoy.

You are at the age of my eldest son, so I feel this instinct to have you know how gifted you are.

Blessings, Jo
Comment Written by JoAnn Forsberg on 16-Jan-2017

Neglect by Dean Kuch

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Sad, sad truth throughout mankind's history. Then, is also one occuring today as so many children become refuges and society does nothing to fed, clothes, house these children due to fear of their parents religion.

Do not mean to preach. Yet, this is the honest emotion your words brought to my mind. So sharing my soul thoughts as a response.

Blessings, Jo
Comment Written by JoAnn Forsberg on 13-Jan-2017

haiku (hearts beat as one) by Dean Kuch

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But, Oh in coldness the sound carries across the barren land so much farther. The warmth of beating hearts melting together offering warmth to those in need of fire.

Love's fire that changes even the bleakest of landscapes.

Excellent, of course and the music... I could leave it up all day long and just savor.

Blessings, Jo
Comment Written by JoAnn Forsberg on 13-Jan-2017

Up Slug by Bill Schott
Chapter 67 of the book Poems

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Sounds like a horrible moment in consumption. Yikes, no snails for me, pickled or not. I guess warm tequila might be the reason why people have eaten some strange things in life. Of course excellently written and makes the point desired.

Blessings, Jo
Comment Written by JoAnn Forsberg on 13-Jan-2017

Everlasting Love by rama devi

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Thought provoking poem. Of course, extremely well written and excellent thought. That whole true love in both it's beauty and pain as we find a center in self to find peace in humanity for other humans. A place that is deeper in it's love for others as human beings too.

Enjoyed greatly, blessings, Jo
Comment Written by JoAnn Forsberg on 13-Jan-2017

What's Eating Albert Fish? by Meia (MESAYERS)

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Well written on the dark side of humanity and the capacity of humans to be so cruel to one another. Haunting words and story that I shall now never forget. You spoke well in showing your disgust at the evil in a human to another human.

Heart breaking,

Blessings, Jo
Comment Written by JoAnn Forsberg on 13-Jan-2017

The Black Tulip by Meia (MESAYERS)

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So beautiful in it's simplicity. Truly, excellent writing that invokes emotions. Appreciate reading all your writings and hope/know your poetry book shall be received by many as a gift to savor.

Blessings, Jo
Comment Written by JoAnn Forsberg on 13-Jan-2017


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