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One Step by Mystic Angel 7777

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An absolutely delightful read, perfectly formatted with an effortless flow throughout.......thoroughly enjoyable......
Best wishes .......
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 15-Sep-2019

The Ride by catch22

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

The creative visions delivered in this work really captures the readers imagination.
Excellent patterns of sound are used to create a language we can just fall into and enjoy the ride.
A superb piece of writing...loved it.
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 15-Sep-2019

Something's Fishy by Thomas Bowling

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Ha ha.......I see you haven't lost your touch Thomas......still a funny man.
Really enjoyed this, clever, unique and 100% Tom Bowling.
Best wishes
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 15-Sep-2019

I Want To Be Like Spider-Man by Raul1

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Never say never.........Hill needs to get bitten by a spider in a science lab and prove his teacher wrong.
A great 100 words flash story Raul, thoroughly enjoyable
Best wishes
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 15-Sep-2019

From Out of the Mist by Janice Canerdy

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Janice, this absolutely wonderful, a lovely Halloween poem that had such a nice smooth flow to it....
Beautiful artwork which accompanies your words a treat.
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 15-Sep-2019

A Ghostly Tale by Boogienights

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Absolutely loved this Halloween poem, beautifully written with a lovely smooth flow.
Super lines that give an excellent eerie feel to your words.
Loved it
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 15-Sep-2019

Gettin' Rich in Washington by Robert Zimmerman

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A fantastic poem about the financial gains of being a politician in Washington DC.
Well written with excellent rhythm and brilliant lines.
Thoroughly enjoyable
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 15-Sep-2019

Before the Dawn by Sugarray77

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Hi Melissa, what a beautiful sonnet, effortless, smooth read with excellent rhythm and wonderful rhyming throughout.
A gorgeous piece of writing
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 15-Sep-2019

danger and doom by Bichon

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Really enjoyable read, you have captured the moment thunder and lightning strikes superbly well.
Artwork that fits your words like hand in glove.....excellent
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 15-Sep-2019

When inspiration strikes by Iza Deleanu

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What a thoroughly enjoyable poem Iza, love the subject of inspiration and you have really executed your thoughts brilliantly.
Particularly enjoyed the last stanza.
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 15-Sep-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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