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Forbidden Pleasure by nomi338

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A very well written poem, warning the dangers of children entering the world of adults.
An excellent flow, with lines of great heed and heartfelt words.
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 15-Sep-2019

Unusual Bond by Peter Nwaobi

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Hi Peter, really enjoyed this senryu in honour of your bed.........
Love the last line.
A brilliant photo which marries with your words perfectly ..........
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 15-Sep-2019

Inner Beauty by Susan Larson

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Really enjoyed this Limerick Susan,
I guess it's the opposite to beauty's only skin deep?.....
A beautiful picture to accompany your words
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 15-Sep-2019

Hindsight by Gypsymooncat

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A wonderfully crafted poem, made me reflect on times I've spent with the older generations and listened to the tales they have told.
A lovely flow with some fantastic lines.
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 15-Sep-2019

Spellbinding Love by Diana L Crawford

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Hi Diana
A beautifully crafted 5-7-5 poem that paints such a vivid picture.
Your words marry perfectly with the chosen artwork.......absolutely delightful
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 15-Sep-2019

Global Warming by Dorothy Farrell

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Hi Dorothy, what a wonderful one line poem, really gets the point across on how important it is for people to change their ways to help the world.
Excellent writing
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 15-Sep-2019

Let's Not Forget by sandramitchell

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What a wonderful poem Sandra and a poem of the month winner to boot.
Very well deserved, an effortless flow with terrific rhythm married with some unbelievable rhyming.
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 15-Sep-2019

Village Beast by Heather Knight

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Hi Maria, absolutely loved this story, beautifully written with the little twist of a shape shifter at the end, a unique piece of writing.
Best wishes
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 15-Sep-2019

Hue and Cry? by karenina

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A wonderful piece of writing Karenina, beautifully penned with the most delightful lines. You have integrated colours into the poem brilliantly.
Loved it
Best wishes
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 14-Sep-2019

Flowering beauty grows by Darkhorse555

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I really enjoyed this love poem contest entry, some wonderful lines that entrap the feeling of being in love beautifully.
Excellent writing
Best wishes
Mitchell
Comment Written by YNWA on 14-Sep-2019


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