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Dolly'sPoems

The Name Game! by Seshadri_Sreenivasan

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You made me smile here with your inventive story and the year of the rat sounds so appropriate for 2020. My year is the Rabbit, this year is the Oz. But your new inventive names for last year and this year made me smile. Love Dolly x
Comment Written by Dolly'sPoems on 20-Jan-2021

Friends by MissMerri

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When we can share our troubles, life seems so much more bearable during the tough times. I am thankful for my friends, you paid tribute to friendship here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written by Dolly'sPoems on 20-Jan-2021

Step Away From the Scissors! by Mrs. KT

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I loved the humorous sentiments here Diane and you rose to the challenge with this pinned decimal, you cracked the internal rhyming and I just notices one spag, the last line should match the sound (bloke). An easy fix I should think, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written by Dolly'sPoems on 20-Jan-2021

Essentially Nonessential by ExperiencingLiphe

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I reckon all people who work are essential and I thanked my local grocery store for staying open during the lockdown and what would we do without food! The panic to get the vaccine will soon be over as it is slowly being administered to everyone. Questions will certainly be asked about how this procedure was rolled out in the future. Grocery workers are as essential as health workers to me, love Dolly x
Comment Written by Dolly'sPoems on 20-Jan-2021

The Stupor by justswf
Chapter 22 of the book A Unique Perspective

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We can't attractive everyone with our sexuality and some people see this connection as shallow and require a more deep and meaningful connection, I enjoyed your short poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written by Dolly'sPoems on 20-Jan-2021

Society's Plea by justswf
Chapter 11 of the book A Unique Perspective

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Gangs are a real problem as when youngsters get together they become brave and are encouraged by others to do things they would not consider doing on their own, you bring home the dangers here in your well constructed free-write, love Dolly x
Comment Written by Dolly'sPoems on 20-Jan-2021

Our Life Path by Joanne Gill

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We have a choice in life and we either make the best of it or we see the worst in it. There is always someone who is less fortunate than ourself and we should appreciate life as we never know when it will all be over, I champion your words here Joanne, a pleasure to ready your positivity, love Dolly x
Comment Written by Dolly'sPoems on 20-Jan-2021

What I Think of You

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Your words are endearing and kind and you have obviously made a connection with someone on line who has touched your heart and will probably never meet. I am not sure this is real love, more like a virtual love where you both see the best in each other for a few minutes per day, love Dolly x
Comment Written by Dolly'sPoems on 20-Jan-2021
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A Frog and a Dog

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A fun rhyming poem and children would love the rhythm in your words here and the frog and dog would entertain them, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written by Dolly'sPoems on 20-Jan-2021
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Legacy by Jenny Kartchner

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We leave our legacy and hope that it is enough to nurture future generations. I feel confident that my children and my grandchildren have been sufficiently influenced to lead good positive lives and your words filled me with joy here as we pass on a faithful message, love Dolly x
Comment Written by Dolly'sPoems on 20-Jan-2021


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