Across a Broken Landscape
by Mrs. KT
This was a great narrative poem that had some strong emotional underpinnings to it. I liked how you use this image of the broken wing on the little bird to speak of a broken relationship, and the refrain echoing through the piece, 'do you remember?' keeps pecking away and chipping away at the distance, to finally break through and make a connection. Through love. Its a mother's constant, faithful love, that endures through all trials, through all strains, that never breaks and keeps us tethered. estory
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Comment Written by estory on 03-Mar-2021
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
Hello estory!
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review.
I so appreciate your perspective, and I am pleased my words resonated with you!
So very grateful.
Thank you!
diane
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