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Peaceful Soul by Ricky1024
Chapter 8 of the book "Written Faith"

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Hi Ricky, I see that you are still writing. I'm back Tier V. KING. But my pen name is changed to asem.inspirations.

This poem is sweet and it's somewhat like a lullaby. Nice
Comment Written by Asem.inspirations on 05-Jan-2021

Zoo Murder: Interview by Bill Schott
Chapter 3 of the book Zoo Murder:

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Hello Bill: I'm very interested in those faux fur chairs. This story seems well on its way already so I will have to dig deep to see where you started the story.

Your characters are interesting so far
Comment Written by Asem.inspirations on 05-Jan-2021

The World of Poetic Bugs by Dolly'sPoems

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Hi Dolly, your introduction poem to your new book is great and the book is a great idea. Yes, because you're right most people don't like insects. But them there are those insects that are extremely important to our universe. They play a major role so to learn of each and what their contribution is is very smart.
Comment Written by Asem.inspirations on 05-Jan-2021

Selective Hearing by lyenochka

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Good morning Lyenochka: I fell in love with this lune poem right away as I am dealing with this situation with my 22 year old daughter. I cant tell her anything. She wants to be right about hom but mother knows he's a creep and a con.

Anyway, I loved it and it's right on point, exactly what happens.
Comment Written by Asem.inspirations on 30-Dec-2020

Sister Sledge... by royowen

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Good morning Roy: Love the poem, full of good thoughts and I can totally relate.

When I returned to God, I had to leave all of my old habits and friends. If I ever bumped into them I would explain the changes on me but mostly they knew because even in my old ways I would preach to them or share a scriptural thought.

Change was totally necessary so once again I can totally relate. Loved it all
Comment Written by Asem.inspirations on 30-Dec-2020

Heard by Jannypan (Jan)

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Hey there Janny pan: The poem is interest, brief and to the point.
But the total post is full of interesting information about your topic. It's obvious you did your research. It was an interesting read.
Comment Written by Asem.inspirations on 30-Dec-2020

Did I Remember To ...? by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 55 of the book 2020 - 6

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Good morning again, barbara: This is another thoughtful poem. I love that it is in the form of a prayer and is so realistic. Sometimes we tend to forget to thank God. I guess it's because we know that he knows everything already so we think that we don't have to say what he knows. I know that lately I forget to even pray
ir just put it off for later. But God actually wants to hear us express ourselves. So your poem was a wonderful reminder for me.
Comment Written by Asem.inspirations on 30-Dec-2020

Walking With My Friends by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 67 of the book New Saved

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Good morning, Barbara: This is a bouncy and fun children's poem. I could see her friends in your clear descriptions of them and I could relate to the whole situation with mother and child. Good poem. It makes me happy
Comment Written by Asem.inspirations on 30-Dec-2020

Contentment Wins by Dolly'sPoems

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Good morning, Dolly: This is such a pleasant and thoughtful poem. It's full of positivity and goodness in life. So I agree: contentment wins. Life is so much better and we live longer when we're content.

I love the pictures that came to mind as I read your poem, beautiful!
Comment Written by Asem.inspirations on 30-Dec-2020

Brothers In Arms by RGstar

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But of course it is a perfect poem. It gives honor to those who have paid the highest price, given their lives for a country who so easily forgets such sacrifice. Those who survive come back mostly to a life that many shun. You have explained this so eloquently, in a way that reminds us of the sadness of it all. My heart went out as I read it. There is evil in war, murder and in death itself. May the day finally come when these things will become only something that used to happen on this earth.

Bravo, my dear brother. It is as usual, extraordinary work. It's great to be back to read your work.
Comment Written by Asem.inspirations on 30-Dec-2020


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