Hi Deb. I agree with your notes, it is always good to relive great memories from the past with our mates.
This is a wonderful poem. I especially like this part:
"Cool Gulf waves splashing their hot feet.
(Just a tip, whenever possible don't use adverbs (Words ending with "ly.") Perhaps here, just "in love" would work just as well, if not better, my friend.
: ) Bob
Comment Written by Mastery on 08-Jul-2020