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Mirror's message by Sanku

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Well done Sanku, my friend. I am sorry I have missed so much, I have been away actually for the most part. I wish you and yours a Happy Holiday season. God bless you. :) Bob
Comment Written by Mastery on 10-Dec-2019

Curse of the Blue States by Robert Zimmerman

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This is clever alright, Robert, but I learned a long time ago (and I have been on this site for over 16 years,) that two things to stay clear of are religion and politics in our writing. Bet keep opinions rto oneself. :) Bob
Comment Written by Mastery on 10-Dec-2019

Lola Star by Thomas Bowling
Chapter 8 of the book Among Us

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Very well done Thomas. From start to finish this chapter holds the reader's interest and makes them want more as soon as possible. I am sorry I have missed so much of this story. Happy Holidays, my friend. Bob
Comment Written by Mastery on 10-Dec-2019

Daughter of my Heart by nomi338

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Hi Nolan. I can easily understand your grief as I also lost a child when he was 14. Nothing hurts us more than the loss of a child. This time of year always seems to make our loss and grief more acute as it is filled with memories. I loved these lines, my friend:
"Do I miss you? Does a man miss a limb that has been severed when he tries to take a step? Does a singer miss his voice when that he can no longer sing?"

Try to enjoy the season Nolan.. Bob
Comment Written by Mastery on 10-Dec-2019

Smog Messing My Jog by Sankey
Chapter 66 of the book Geoffrey's Musings.

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So good to hear from you again, Geoff. clever poetry posted here. I hate to hear such bad news, my friend. You certainly do have your share
of problems, eh? I wish you well as always, my friend. Happy Holidays. :) Bob
Comment Written by Mastery on 10-Dec-2019

Christmas Trials by robyn corum

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Meter Schmeter, who cares, robyn when the message is as much fun as this one is. you have a knack for making us smile and always have had. Bless you and Happy Holidays! Bob
Comment Written by Mastery on 10-Dec-2019

Missing You by Pearl Edwards

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Hi Valda. so sorry I have been missing so much lately. Been busy preparing for my new book coming out in January. I love the emotion your poem gives us here. very well done and sort of intimate- feeling. Happy Holidays, my friend. :) Bob
Comment Written by Mastery on 10-Dec-2019

Autumn's Aftermath

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Fine examples of alliteration incorporated here, author. Wwitty lines that give the poem life like these for instance:

"An autumnal abundance are,
and an appropriate aperitif awaits..."

Bravo! :) Bob
Comment Written by Mastery on 10-Dec-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Dealing With Memories by jaybird1

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An absolute gem here, Jay. I love every line of this poem. It is one of the best I have ever read here on Fanstory. I liked these lines in particular, my friend:

"what hurts the most are precious, dear.
They sadden heart and bring a tear."

Happy Holidays dear friend. :) Bob
Comment Written by Mastery on 10-Dec-2019

Cunning Beauty by Heather L. Luke

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Congratulations Heather. You are the winner in this contest for sure in my opinion. this poetry, although brief is well written and meaningful. I wish you the best of luck with it. Be sure to let me know when you win. :) Happy Holidays! Bob
Comment Written by Mastery on 10-Dec-2019


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