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Fire, Rain and Bloodstains! by Commando

Exceptional
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This piece was very descriptive, and was easy to read. The phrase "Elite friends" really painted a picture in my mind. Keep writing.

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Comment Written by C.C Williams on 13-Oct-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
Ocean Odyssey by angel123

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level


Your poem was readable and free - flowing; not too long, not too short. Your usage of descriptive words was phenomenal, and your words painted a picture in my head.

Well done.

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Comment Written by C.C Williams on 13-Oct-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
Ocean of Discontent by sandy montgomery

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I see you've entered a contest.

Your use of the given words was incredible, and the descriptive lines really painted a picture. Your words made me think - which is what poetry is supposed to make you do, and some poets can't paint a picture in the readers' minds. Well done.

CC
Comment Written by C.C Williams on 13-Oct-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
Old Glory by Mimi Linny

Good
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Mimi,

Your poem was easy - flowing and easy to read. American history is so important, yet some people still underestimate our need for it.

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Comment Written by C.C Williams on 13-Oct-2017
car history sequel with packaging by bertodi

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This poem wasn't too long, or too short. You delivered your message well, and your poem was free - flowing and easy to read.

Well done.

CC
Comment Written by C.C Williams on 13-Oct-2017
President Donald John Trump by Daphne Molson

Good
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Although I do not agree with your viewpoint, I believe you delivered your message well. I'm glad you decided to put a note beneath your poem, explaining why you feel the way you do.

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Comment Written by C.C Williams on 13-Oct-2017
Thorn Cut by briannaellison

Excellent
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This poem was not too long, nor too short. As I was reading, I could feel your words echoing through me. The description you gave paints a picture of the past in the reader's mind.

CC
Comment Written by C.C Williams on 13-Oct-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
Traffic Stop by teols2016

Excellent
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This piece had great dialogue, and it was spaced out and easy to read - not too long, not to short.

Overall, this was a good story.

CC
Comment Written by C.C Williams on 13-Oct-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
The Beauty Secret by Wabigoon

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This piece was very philosophical and obviously had a lot of thought, time, and effort put into it. I was drawn in as I read it.

Great job.

CC
Comment Written by C.C Williams on 13-Oct-2017
'Till Death Do Us Part by Kerry Robinson

Average
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This is good, but it needs to be longer to express more. Maybe try extending the poem by 2 or 3 lines? I would classify this as a quote rather than a poem.

Keep writing!

-CC
Comment Written by C.C Williams on 17-Jun-2017
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