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Connie Frazier

Broken Potential by DragonSkulls

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This is really great. I love the layout of the text with the photo and the way it adds impact to your words. The writing here is strong, engaging, and flows easily from beginning to end.
Comment Written by Connie Frazier on 04-Apr-2019

Living In Whispers by 24chas

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This has a nice stream-of-consciousness flow to it. Your words are simple, but true and raw. Thanks for sharing them with us.
Comment Written by Connie Frazier on 02-Apr-2019

Mask by 24chas

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That's so sad, and true that we hide from each other all the time because it's too dangerous to be real, except with those few people who really care and can be trusted. It's so important to have a few of those around. Nicely written.
Comment Written by Connie Frazier on 02-Apr-2019

Beware by LovnPeace

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Wise words. You've said a lot in a few short lines. Someone once told me to always trust a warning a person gives about themselves. I've never forgotten that advise because my tendency is to see and believe the best in people, but beware. It's beautiful art that you found to accompany your words. Well done.
Comment Written by Connie Frazier on 02-Apr-2019

Alexandrite by lyenochka
Chapter 2 of the book Poems for Gems

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This sounds so conversational, but is really a well constructed poem with rhymes that work so well. It was also educational. I enjoyed learning about this. Excellent!
Comment Written by Connie Frazier on 02-Apr-2019

Encore by BlueMarble

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Wonderful! This is very fun. I enjoyed your creatively invented new words. The sound of them added a lot to the rock theme of the poem and you found a perfect picture to accompany your words.
Comment Written by Connie Frazier on 02-Apr-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Promise of spring. by judester

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I love this. Your imagery is so vivid that I can see, hear, and feel the environment that you describe. You rhymes work well together. Very nicely written.
Comment Written by Connie Frazier on 02-Apr-2019

Smiles by Sally Law

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Ah, this is a lovely Nonet poem that makes me smile, and it's nice to see the smiling faces of your family. I like the description of smiles being like rays of sun. It's a good analogy. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Connie Frazier on 02-Apr-2019

Love is The Answer... by Artasylum

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I like the subtle, but consistent, use of alliteration - "bullies blare", "wicked words", "rise-up, rebuke". This is a well-written ABC poem and I wholeheartedly agree with the message. I enjoyed this very much.
Comment Written by Connie Frazier on 08-Mar-2019

Laughter - Senryu (5-7-5) by HealingMuse

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"Lighter shift, attitude lift" - What a great observation and good advice! This is a fun poem that lightened my day and is great advice. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Connie Frazier on 08-Mar-2019


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