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Bungling Bob by Debbie Pope

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Good job on the set up and aptly describing his feelings of failure and inadequacies. The only thing is... I am confused why he needed large diapers... how does the bathtub play in, and who were they wrapping? Just some thoughts.

Melissa
Comment Written by Sugarray77 on 22-Feb-2020

A Timeless Friendship by Craig 68

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Craig, I send you my dearest and most heartfelt sympathy on the loss of your friend. Your free verse flows beautifully through your memories and is a lovely tribute to him.

Melissa
Comment Written by Sugarray77 on 22-Feb-2020

Colby's Most Amazing Cat by Teri7

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Hello Teri. I enjoyed this adorable write about a cat with two different colored eyes. Your photo is a perfect compliment to it. All the best, and good luck.

Melissa
Comment Written by Sugarray77 on 22-Feb-2020

Buttercups by Dolly'sPoems

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Well done on this flawless Awdl sonnet, Dolly. I enjoyed it and love those little buttercups that bloom in the springtime. You used the perfect descriptions to capture their blooms.

Melissa
Comment Written by Sugarray77 on 22-Feb-2020

A Wounded Country by Therese Caron

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Excellent job Terry on saying something very profound in just six small words. A delightful entry and very competitive. I wish you luck, but do not think you will need it!! Well done.

Melissa
Comment Written by Sugarray77 on 21-Feb-2020

Time is an illusion... by royowen

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Great job Roy... an outstanding presentation of thought and perception. I have been reading several verses today about time, its passage, and gaining new perspectives as we age. This flawless verse joins them in being very well written and apt.

Melissa
Comment Written by Sugarray77 on 21-Feb-2020

The Holy Bible by Teri7

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Hi Teri... I am a bit confused... it says it is entered in the CinQuain poetry contest??? I enjoyed reading this verse about the Word of God. Well written and presented.

Melissa
Comment Written by Sugarray77 on 21-Feb-2020

Life's a story book by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 242 of the book Little Good Morning Quotes

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Good Morning Sandra... I like the analogy of turning pages to the passage of time and seasons. An apt comparison. I hope you enjoy a lovely day too!!

Melissa
Comment Written by Sugarray77 on 21-Feb-2020

Persian Tulips by Dolly'sPoems

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A lovely sonnet that uses your own art to enhance it. Well done, Dolly, on this rendition about Persian tulips. I love tulips ~ especially the tall Darwin cultivars~. An enjoyable sonnet!!

Melissa
Comment Written by Sugarray77 on 21-Feb-2020

Fearful Thoughts by Dolly'sPoems

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Excellent job Dolly in the content and construction of this Chime Operandi. I think this is flawlessly written in the parameters that are required, but the theme is resonating too. Well done.

Melissa
Comment Written by Sugarray77 on 21-Feb-2020


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