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I watched... by royowen

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God is an awesome God! If we walk in His grace and have faith, there is nothing He cannot and will not do. He loves and protects us even if we feel we do not deserve. I loved the poem and the flow of the rhyme. Well written. NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 31-Dec-2017

Holiday, Holiday by michaelcahill

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What a joyful song which brings us into the new year. I like the first verse, 'we all have beliefs'. Thank you for sharing this joyful song. Happy New year. NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 31-Dec-2017
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Beet Poetry by Sis Cat

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Sometimes we forget that what we have to get across doesn't have to be in a long poem but can be said in five lines. Nicely written. The imagery used and the picture brings the poem alive. Thanks for sharing. NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 31-Dec-2017

A Cold Winter's Day by Harry Smith

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The imagery used brings the poem alive. Nicely written. It speaks of passion and warmth, love and strength. Thank you for sharing. NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 31-Dec-2017
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And Drunk I'm Not by easyeverett1

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Very well written. I like the seventh stanza, 'we hold onto our friggin sanity by drowning out outside a bar'. I can relate! I like but I have to say God believes in you even if you don't. Thank you for sharing and Happy New Year! NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 31-Dec-2017

Use Our Past, Lord by patcelaw

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This is so true. I look back in my past today and although I struggled, God got me through it all and here I am today to wake another morning. I liked. Thank you for sharing. NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 31-Dec-2017

Write . . . by Dolly'sPoems

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Excellently said! Writing is a passion and it can say and do many different things for many different people. For me it cures my past demons. Thank you for writing this and Happy New Year! NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 31-Dec-2017

Thanks for Choosing Me by Harry Smith

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Very well done job at capturing the contest rules. I believe God teaches us and molds us and in the end I believe He will say "job well done". Excellent lyrics. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 31-Dec-2017
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Trinity by SweetStreet00
Chapter 3 of the book Seven Heavenly Sins

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I like the rhyme scheme used here. The metaphors and imagery are nicely used in this poem. Makes the poem come alive. Thanks for sharing, NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 10-Dec-2017

JESUS and the FIREFLY by Jannypan (Jan)
Chapter 14 of the book GOD IS EVERYWHERE

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Lovely write. I like the metaphors and imagery used in this poem. It makes the poem come alive and captures the readers eye from beginning to end. Thanks for sharing, NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 10-Dec-2017


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