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Old Sailor's Prayer by Octavia

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Lovely read. I like the rhyme scheme used here and the imagery. Nothing like having a place you feel at home and makes you feel free. Thank you for sharing, NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 10-Dec-2017

Behind the Masks... by rama devi

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The message here is extremely intense and actually reaches home for me. We should never ignore our family no matter the past conflict especially in time of need. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest, NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 10-Dec-2017

Your Arms by Sis Cat

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Intense. I like the repeat word of 'arms' at the end of each stanza. The poem itself captures you from beginning to end, great write. Thank you for sharing, NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 10-Dec-2017

Remember Me by catch22

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So true. When you get old all that wealth, high education, etc...won't matter, its what's what you've done in your life that's affected others that will matter-what's in you're heart that matters. Great write. Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 10-Dec-2017

Inside My Stable by JennaG

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Great write! Nothing more amazing than to see a babe being born. I like the rhyme scheme used. Thanks for sharing and best wishes, NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 10-Dec-2017

Who Writes Your Resolutions? by Reese Turner

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Cute. They say women are always nagging about something, but this seems like a good nag. Great write. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest, NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 10-Dec-2017

Why So Cruel? by Asem.inspirations

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What a horrible disease to be diagnosed with. It's hard when it happens to a loved one and you feel helpless to do anything about it. Great write. Thank you for sharing this, NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 10-Dec-2017

Homespun Christmas by Sharon Haiste

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I like how you captured the essence of Christmas in this poem. Now and days it seems Christmas is only about the gifts and not family. We need to get back to it being about gatherings and family. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest, NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 10-Dec-2017

My heart is on ice. by robina1978

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A heart only needs a little heat to keep it warm and pumping. I like the meaning this poem gives. Nice write. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest, NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 10-Dec-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Lonely Girl by kiwigirl2821

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You're right lonely and drinking do not mix and if you're not careful it could become a habit. Unfortunately I've been here and it was no fun. Nicely written. Thanks for sharing, NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 06-Dec-2017


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