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Sharon Haiste

Hello Mr. Diddles by Sara Taylor1

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I think this is a good story for the Halloween Story contest.
The story is clear and well told.
I would suggest that you might use more punctuation to make the sentences read a little bit smoother.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written by Sharon Haiste on 08-Sep-2021

The Lift by patricia dillon

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I think this is a good entry for the 15 Syllable Poem contest
Your short poem tells a true story of the lift.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written by Sharon Haiste on 08-Sep-2021

Moonlight by rockinm76233

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I think this is a good entry for the 15 Syllable Poem contest.
Your short poem is sweet and the picture a good match.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written by Sharon Haiste on 08-Sep-2021

Iā??m a love sick fool and yet I h by Asher rush L

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I think this is a good entry for the Love Poem Poetry contest.
Your verse is well written and describes someone smitten very well.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written by Sharon Haiste on 08-Sep-2021

Fanstory by Chrissy710

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I think this is a good entry for the 15 Syllable Poem contest.
Your short poem describes this Fanstory site very well.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written by Sharon Haiste on 08-Sep-2021

Home Haircut by Chrissy710

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I think this is a cute and whimsical verse about something that is affecting us all now.
It's funny how we take certain things for granted, like a hair cut, until they are gone.
Sharon
Comment Written by Sharon Haiste on 08-Sep-2021

Failed attempt? by lightink

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I think this is a good entry for the 15 Syllable Poem contest.
Your short verse has a clear message.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written by Sharon Haiste on 08-Sep-2021

Foolin' around by jenintorre

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I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 Poem writing prompt.
Your short poem is fun and funny. Kids, eh?
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written by Sharon Haiste on 08-Sep-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Is That You Sweetheart? by Judy Lawless

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I think this is a good entry for the Non-Fiction Writing contest.
This story is clear and well told and your grief and shock are evident.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written by Sharon Haiste on 08-Sep-2021

The Path Not Taken by NANCY V. FORREST

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I think this is a good entry for the An Autumn Tale writing prompt.
Your short story is well told. I like the way you use Autumn as a season of the year and of life.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written by Sharon Haiste on 08-Sep-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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