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KIss by nartoonla

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Very nice description of the kiss. Something that can take so little effort and come so natural and mean so much. Great job! And good luck in the competition!
Comment Written by Edwin Hofert on 08-Mar-2018
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Especially The Small Ones by Mrs. KT

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I think I might be partial. But in any case I have no doubt your mother played a part in the flowers being brought back into the picture after being dismissed by the florist. Much the same way I know she will be stopping by to see what you're up to on her birthday. She is the hand that's on your shoulder..
Comment Written by Edwin Hofert on 26-Feb-2018

The Milk White Moon by Debbie Pope

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Someday maybe. When you're not lawyering or raising children and grandchildren. Maybe you could teach me how to say more by saying less. I tend to be more on the long winded side lol. An awesome poem. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written by Edwin Hofert on 26-Feb-2018

haiku (black squirrel scurries) by Mrs. KT

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I don't know how you do it. But I will keep watching til I figure it out lol. Great poem and how true it is. Good luck in the contest! And good luck staying on top of that hungry squirrel. I wonder? Could this poem have also worked as if from the squirrels eyes lol.
Comment Written by Edwin Hofert on 26-Feb-2018

Riches beyond Belief by Dolly'sPoems

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Very very nice! And oh what riches our little ones truly are. An awesome write, straight from the heart! And no doubt the riches they possess in their lovely gramma.
Comment Written by Edwin Hofert on 24-Feb-2018

Bad Temper by Dolly'sPoems

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An awesome reminder for us all. It minds me of that saying about two things you can't take back. A stone that's thrown and the spoken word. Another great write!
Comment Written by Edwin Hofert on 23-Feb-2018

Arsenic and Unhinged Grace by Mrs. KT

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Incredible! I loved it and I hung on every word. You managed to capture it in just the way you intended to! With all it's twists and turns. Roberts scandalous plan was foiled by someone with a better plan. Remind me to never make you angry lol. Great job! It's a winner!
Comment Written by Edwin Hofert on 23-Feb-2018

Shadows of Substance by Ricky1024
Chapter 44 of the book The Book of Fine Poetry

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I have much admiration for people who own their past when their past has been less than perfect. It speaks of strength and character. I know too many people who play down these things as if they never happened. To me they are destined to forget valuable life lessons and are more likely to have them be repeated. Write On!
Comment Written by Edwin Hofert on 21-Feb-2018

More Than a Friend by Ashlie Daza

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Awesome write. Such a long story is told in so few words of a relationship meant to be right from the start. It's a rare thing to find this. The phrase soul mates come to mind for me. Great job and good luck!
Write On!
Comment Written by Edwin Hofert on 21-Feb-2018

Oblivion by Mel E. Furnish
Chapter 3 of the book Poetic Growth

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It's an awesome write. I've been where you were. I heard one time the same boiling water that hardens the egg. Softens the potato. I've chosen to be a potato and not let life harden me. I see you've done the same. Good for you my friend. Write On!
Comment Written by Edwin Hofert on 21-Feb-2018


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