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The Eyes Have It by LisaMay

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This is a nicely-written poem with a smoothness about it. My favorite line is "there's someone searching every trash can." How true that is. Good job on this.
Comment Written by Cheryl I on 02-Oct-2019

Till Death Do Us Part by dejohnsrld (Debbie)

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This was very exciting, and I enjoyed reading it. This is a good selection for the Assassinate Me a Thriller contest. I wish you a lot of luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Cheryl I on 02-Oct-2019
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Prisoner of War by themillerswife

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This was nicely done. The rhythm is very smooth and it flowed without a hiccup. My second husband was finally able to start healing after he visited the moving wall they made for the soldiers who went to Vietnam, and saw his dead buddies name on it. Anyway, you did a good job on this.
Comment Written by Cheryl I on 02-Oct-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Autumn Rapture by RodG

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This is a nicely written poem and a good selection for the No Restrictions Poetry contest. "A callow youth I am again" is how fall makes me feel. Good job.
Comment Written by Cheryl I on 02-Oct-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Damn, Curse, Bum and Oh No! by duchessofdrumborg

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My, Duchess, what an exciting life you lead! Your boyfriend may be a dealer and you had no idea? Quite possible, as I have been in that situation. Another exciting story. Thanks for the entertainment!
Comment Written by Cheryl I on 01-Oct-2019

Just An Old Hippie by Ideasaregems-Dawn

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It's a shame you missed out on that opportunity because of finances. I, too, left almost everything behind in my two divorces. But I have my kids and grandkids close in my heart, so I could have done way worse. Nice job on this, and congratulations on being done writing.
Comment Written by Cheryl I on 01-Oct-2019

Autumn's Orange Hues. by seken58
Chapter 58 of the book Nature's Poetic Voice.

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This is a good entry for the Orange You Glad It's Autumn contest. Autumn is my favorite time of year, and I love all the beautiful colors. Nice job on this poem.
Comment Written by Cheryl I on 01-Oct-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Assassination by Thomas Bowling
Chapter 5 of the book The Deadly Wind

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I really enjoyed reading this. I do have a question. Did you mean to say "career"? "One case of the jitters and my carrier would be over." I can't wait to see what happens next. Nice job.
Comment Written by Cheryl I on 01-Oct-2019

It Was Just Hyperbole by Louise Michelle

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Hahaha! This is hilarious. It's funny that the guy even tried to fulfill his promises in the first place. So much for hyperbole! Nice choice of graphic, as well.
Comment Written by Cheryl I on 30-Sep-2019

Ode to Lidocaine by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 58 of the book 2019 part 4

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Fibromyalgia is very bad. My sister suffers from it, too, though I don't think her symptoms are quite as bad as those you described. I'm glad you have something to help for a while. Nice poem.
Comment Written by Cheryl I on 30-Sep-2019


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