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That is a lament, quite the lament indeed! I know if one is giving away such sugary treasures, a bit of selfish mischief could try to linger in. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!

Comment Written by Jeffrey L. Michaux on 03-Nov-2020

The Fisherman's Son- 86 by Ulla
Chapter 86 of the book The Fisherman's Son

Excellent

Those lasses of Lorenzo's are quite the little feisty pair. Andrew has upgraded his digs and sounds serious about the lad making good on the loan that he is extending to him. I hope that he's successful for the sake of business and friendship. I enjoyed reading this engaging and well written chapter. Well done Ulla!

Comment Written by Jeffrey L. Michaux on 03-Nov-2020

Dahlia by Lisa Wharton

Excellent

I do believe that these beautiful little colorful flowers are eye candy indeed. I love all of the different assorted colors. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!

Comment Written by Jeffrey L. Michaux on 03-Nov-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Sweeper-wiper by Iza Deleanu

Excellent

This is witty, cute, and very adorable. I guess that they might be considered cat burglars, huh? You've done a fine job with this humorous and well written work. Well done!

Comment Written by Jeffrey L. Michaux on 03-Nov-2020

Star crazy by oNray

Excellent

I really like the title of this and how you were able to develop this around it so well. You've described beautifully the attributes of a shooting star. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!

Comment Written by Jeffrey L. Michaux on 03-Nov-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Resting in the Storm by lyenochka

Excellent

This is absolutely beautiful Helen and I love the powerful message conveyed in it. That dynamic duo of faith and trust can't be beat. Just like Moses when He was at the Red Sea surrounded by the Egyptian armies, all we need do like he did is fall back into the arms of the Lord. He is the answer to every problem and will deliver us out of all of our trouble. I really enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!

Comment Written by Jeffrey L. Michaux on 28-Oct-2020

Faith won't slumber... by royowen

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I love the message conveyed in this. I love it when we as believers keep that faith flag flying, knowing that works alone won't save us. We serve an awesome God brother and I'm thankful for that blood of the Lamb! Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!

Comment Written by Jeffrey L. Michaux on 28-Oct-2020

The Dreaded Oxford Comma by lyenochka

Excellent

I like this Helen. I think that being grammatically correct is a great thing. I don't know that I always meet the criteria though. I do like to be that way though and this is a comma that I've used but didn't know that it was called that. I always like the excellent poem that accompanies your work. Thanks for sharing this informative and well written work. Well done!

Comment Written by Jeffrey L. Michaux on 28-Oct-2020

She's the jewel in my crown... by royowen

Excellent

This is so beautiful brother! I'm sure that your jewel is glowing brighter after reading these words of love and adoration. This is really good work and I enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Great job, Happy almost Birthday to the Mrs., and well done!

Comment Written by Jeffrey L. Michaux on 28-Oct-2020

A Month In The Life Of Ella T. by Cynthia Adams1

Excellent

I like what you've presented here. She had many choices but settled on just going back to what was familiar to her. She went to the ex's house. May I never find myself in such a condition. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!

Comment Written by Jeffrey L. Michaux on 28-Oct-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.