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Good Samaritan by Susan Burger

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Great little story. In so few words you have shown a woman trying to escape an unwelcome situation and someone coming to her aid to facilitate her escape. Well done.
Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 09-Mar-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Chances Are Slim by humpwhistle

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Hi humpwhistle,
Great scene setting in so few words. Public embarrassment is handled well and cringe worthy. Good job.
Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 09-Mar-2018

Haiku (fireflies) by Kerry Robinson

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Hi Kerry,
Beautifully put together. Simple words with great imagery. The picture you have included, combine well with your words.
Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 09-Mar-2018

So many Faces by Jeffrey L. Michaux

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Hi Jeffrey,
I truly believe that people put on faces for the occasion. It would be wonderful if they could realize that their one 'true face' would be appreciated by all who would be their friends.
Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 09-Mar-2018

Never Beyond Repair by Jan26
Chapter 48 of the book Poems

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Hi Jan,
I enjoyed your poem immensely. Your words tell me that truth and memories can effect ones life adversely, but there is always hope for a better tomorrow.
Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 09-Mar-2018

SCENTsational by Jannypan (Jan)

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Hi Jan,
I enjoyed your poem and the way you poke fun at these highly scented and misguided people who wend their way through life, unaware of of the effect they have on others.
Well done.
Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 09-Mar-2018

I Imagine White Tulips by Mrs. KT

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Hi Mrs.KT,
I've never seen or read a cleave poem before. You have put together such a beautiful work with much meaning and imagery. Very impressive.
Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 09-Mar-2018

Sudden Impact (Ecstasy!) by Tootie

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Hi Catherine,
I enjoyed your poem. It is simple and yet contains the 'joyful excitement' you aimed for. The image you have chosen embraces your work beautifully, well done.
Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 09-Mar-2018

One Shot by Kathy Allmon

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Hi Kathy,
Don't worry, your poem fits beautifully with the picture. Life is a series of 'one shots' and chances. Great poem. Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 18-Feb-2018

Soft Spaces by Jan26
Chapter 47 of the book Poems

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Hi Jan26,
I've often said that it is not the quantity of words that make a great poem or story, but the quality. Great imagery presented. Well done. Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 18-Feb-2018


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