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Six Stars For The Win! by Mrs. KT

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Hi.
I enjoyed these verses quite a lot. As well as being humorous, It also echoes what others feel about competitions and the waste of time they are; until, that one bit of recognition comes. Well done. Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 18-Feb-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

My Cup Is Half Empty by jaybird1

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Hi jaybird1,
Lovely poem. I agree with you in respecting reality; I also believe that we must act and react to try and fill the cup in the span of life we are given. Great rhyming and thoughts. regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 18-Feb-2018

Harbor of Hades by Dean Kuch

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Hi Dean,
Love the poem. Very atmospheric imagery and when you add the pictures and music, fantastic. Keep up the good writing. Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 18-Feb-2018

The Time Master by rspoet

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Hi rspoet,
I really enjoyed the way you have have set up the various roles, responsible for our lives. Great imagery and rhyming. Well done. Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 18-Feb-2018

The Beasts Within! by Commando

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Hi,
This poem is deep, moving and very, very emotional. PTSD has been around forever and your look at it is sincere, obviously from a person who has experienced it. I hope you get many chances to sleep tomorrow. Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 17-Feb-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

haiku (sunlight hides inside) by rama devi

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Hi rama devi,
A beautiful use of words to make a very thoughtful piece of work, complemented by the picture. Well done. Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 15-Feb-2018

Sun and Moon by Jannypan (Jan)

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Hi Jan,
Not seen this form of poetry before, but your combination of words and the picture itself is enjoyable. Well done. Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 15-Feb-2018

A taste of love by Meia (MESAYERS)

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The story flows and the imagery is good. The characters are well fleshed out and so are their punishments (Gruesome).Well written. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 10-Feb-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Racing the Sunset by Mrs. KT

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Hi Mrs. KT,
Three simple lines filled with imagery. This has been backed up by a beautiful picture which gives strength to your words. Well done. Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 09-Feb-2018

Haiku (Sunset's Silent Song) by Kerry Robinson
Chapter 1 of the book Collection of Nature Poems & Haiku

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Hi Kerry,
I often say that a Haiku is such a simple format, but extremely difficult to master. Your three lines are filled with beautiful imagery, which is complemented by the picture you have used. Well done. Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn
Comment Written by Shawlyn on 09-Feb-2018


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