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Behold the Glory by Sherry Asbury

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I like how you structured this poem. It is clear and concise. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I have enjoyed reading your poetry. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written by Raul1 on 04-Dec-2021

How do I write thee? by Paul McFarland

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This person better start counting right, or it will get worse. I like your poem. Excellent work! Very creative. No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written by Raul1 on 04-Dec-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Separate Pools by nomi338

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I think that guns shouldn't be allowed to the public. I believe that only the cops and military should have them to catch the bad guys. It is my opinion. Thanks for sharing! Interesting poem.
Comment Written by Raul1 on 04-Dec-2021

Unresolved by JLR

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It is an interesting poem. I don't know who can change the spark plugs, but it was nice trying. Little humor there. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Good luck!
Comment Written by Raul1 on 04-Dec-2021

Poetic Needs by jaybird1

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I knew that poetry is like a country song because between a song and a poem they are similar. It is like singing a song. Very creative. Thank you for sharing! I like it.
Comment Written by Raul1 on 04-Dec-2021

Momma's Songs by Tina Crute

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The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. It is clear and concise. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
Comment Written by Raul1 on 28-Nov-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

haiku (squirrel's bushy tail) by Jannypan (Jan)

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This is very creative and it is what a haiku poem should look like. You did well with your poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes found. I like it. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written by Raul1 on 27-Nov-2021

Steel Grey by zanya

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Poor Jake his girlfriend no longer loves him. He has a broken heart. Someone needs to cheer him up. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written by Raul1 on 27-Nov-2021

Travel The Kind Road by jaybird1

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It is like they all say that life is an emotional rollercoaster ride, but you also get to enjoy it. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written by Raul1 on 27-Nov-2021

I Am Ironman by Gloria ....

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Those people running the marathon should be credited for their efforts. It takes hard work to win them. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written by Raul1 on 27-Nov-2021


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