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The Queen's Love by DragonSkulls

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This is excellent! A great love story with some action thrown in. The picture you created to go with this is very cool. Hell hath no fury, eh? lol This story poem is very well written with perfect meter. It is very visual and emotional and takes the reader on an awesome ride into a love/death scenario. I loved "get up, you silly fool." Very romantic entry into this contest. Well done!! Lynda
Comment Written by LyndaS on 18-Nov-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The Black Bat Lounge by DragonSkulls

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Ha! Love the ending on this! Years ago I was on a women's pool league and I really enjoyed it. Good story with what you had to work with. Try to remember 3 weeks from now that you entered this. Great art!
Comment Written by LyndaS on 06-Nov-2020

The Last Unicorn by DragonSkulls

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Oh, pardon me, Sire. How do you want your unicorn steak cooked? Hahahaha!

This was a great little story with a hilarious, twist ending. Story development was excellent and you smoothly and effortlessly led us to your killer (albeit out there) ending which I enjoyed very much.

Also, your art drew me into this post. Your unicorn is glorious and using Clive Owen as Captain Matir really intrigued me.

This is a great (and original) entry into this contest advertisement and I wish you luck in the booth. You'll have my vote. Thanks for the fantasy escape. My favorite! Well done!!
Comment Written by LyndaS on 05-Nov-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The Las Vegas Angel by DragonSkulls

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Wow! Giving you a sixer for the creepy factor! This is awesome. Did not expect the cop to be the serial killer! Nice story development and you did a great job in 500 words. Good luck in the booth! Lynda
Comment Written by LyndaS on 25-Oct-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Harold Jenkins' Ghost by DragonSkulls

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I love a great story in a poem and this is awesome. Also enjoy a good ghost story. How fun to have a ghost in your new home that shows you where his stolen stash is. Love the art! Well done!
Comment Written by LyndaS on 22-Oct-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

They Say Trick or Treat by DragonSkulls

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Good to see some genuine horror in this contest. This Halloween Horror 5-7-5 is a treat! Your art work is mighty creepy and goes well your little tale of kidnapping kids on Halloween night. I think this should do well in the booth. It is after all...horrific! Love the picture you created. You captured the sickness perfectly. Well done!

Lynda

Comment Written by LyndaS on 16-Oct-2020

Surely I Jest by DragonSkulls

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...thy words I so freely molest. Hahaha!! So it's pretty much open season on everybody?? This is hilarious and you have CLEARLY answered Yvette's challenge spot on. Sarcastic Awareness Month?? Too funny!! This is a great entry into this contest and I predict it will do well in the booth. Very creative and dripping with your expert sarcasm. Well done! Lynda

Oh, yeah. KILLER ART ON THIS!!!

Comment Written by LyndaS on 14-Oct-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The Infomercial by DragonSkulls

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Again, I'm thinking your mind is like some demented candy store. Who thinks like this?? Lol

Quite the post you have here. Great meter and rhyme, outside the box and hilarious. Your art work is delightful and compliments this entry beautifully. It's so cool that you have this graphic, artistic talent that enables you to craft exactly what you want for your off-the-wall posts.

Zip-n-Squat... LMFAO!!!! Well done, dude!

Lynda
Comment Written by LyndaS on 02-Oct-2020

The Crap In The Corner by LisaMay

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LOL! This was great. It was nice to read a humorous story without eluding to politics, covid or global warming. This should do well with the committee. (you know...those mysterious entities that rule us) Thanks for the laugh! Kiss Kiss Lynda

How you doing? We are fine.
Comment Written by LyndaS on 02-Oct-2020

I'm a Bit Irate by DragonSkulls

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Holy crap! What a brave, well defined post. I agree and support everything you said.

My grandmother raised me with two mantras. I can be anything I want to be and also that I am not any better than anyone else. I was brought up in a very diverse neighborhood. Thanks to her I had many friends of many colors.

I have NEVER had a racist thought in my head. Protesters screaming at me on my TV "assuring me that I am" really pissed me off.

I applaud your direct honesty and for being able to express how I feel. Excellent rhyme and meter. A well thought out entry into this contest. You have my vote.

Lynda
Comment Written by LyndaS on 26-Sep-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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