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Y. M. Roger

Worth the Hardships by Elizabeth McCombs

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A beautiful thought in seventeen syllables for the contest here -- gotten go in knowing there will be pain.... Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 15-Nov-2020

Beast by Nick Berry

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An interesting offering, here with the first and last lines being a veritable mirror of each other... at least in the mind's eye. Thanx for sharing! ;)
Be sure to pop back in there and either blacken your background or your text because the contrast makes it nearly impossible to read...
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A Tender Moment by poetwatch

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Wow - Jose! This one gives a new 'lust' to the 'ships in the night' encounter, leaving the reader with a desire for just one more... ;) Well done, sir -- love the 'feeling' of this one! ;) Yvette
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Who Rejects God's Word by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 141 of the book Wisdom & Truths to start the day

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Even if one is uncertain, always best to start with the word as truth and 'look' from there... :) A wonderful offering for your 'modernization', Sandra -- thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
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Where Embellishments Lie by Keelan Cloud

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A very thought-provoking offering here - great use of cultural icons and beliefs! ;) Your rhymes are strong but it is difficult to find a rhythm/flow through your poem... I would suggest you start by counting syllables and establish a 'pattern' for one stanza and use it throughout on all of them... ;) Thanx for sharing this evening! ;)
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u.p. by Taurus the Elder

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Okay, so I gotta say... I've never actually heard of U.P.... although I have read up quite a bit on all the others there: interesting way to refer to one of them... ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
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We're Gonna Win Tomorrow. by rhonnie69

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Huh.... never thought of it that way, but, yeah, that can be so annoying at tournaments and such!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing, Rhonnie -- have a great evening! ;) Yvette
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 15-Nov-2020

Sermon on the Last Day of School by Victoria...

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Wow -- such a wonderful and all-encompassing terza rima for the contest here, mystery author! If only all the ears out there could hear! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 15-Nov-2020
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Christmas Lights by Boogienights

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A delightfully cheery offering for the acrostic here with promises of happy holidays just around the corner! ;) Thanx for such an uplift to the spirits here and best of luck in the contest! ;)
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How WILLY WONKA Lost The War by djsaxon

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Well, there it all is, in the rare DJ form to present things just a bit 'too sweet'... lol!! ;) :) A delightful (or sad?) offering for the evening, sir -- thanx for sharing! ;)
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