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Y. M. Roger

Stitched by CPL

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It may hold more light, but it will never let it in the same and it will never allow it to shine as bright.... or maybe mine's just not there yet... :) Especially when one never thought they'd have to ever make another choice... A wonderful free verse that is an awesome portrayal of the process of healing, my lady!! ;) Yvette

is worst form of --> [did you mean...?] is the worst form of OR the worst form of

that will forever --> [perhaps...?] and will forever OR they will forever

Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 08-Jul-2020

A Snitch by Ray Hall

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First: you should pop back in there and put a 'warning for language' on this one, Ray. ;) :) That being said, this is still very true today although they also use even more derogatory terms such as 'whores'.... sad. Thanx for sharing! ;)
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 08-Jul-2020

Soar by jaded831

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Some how the connection between the first two lines is lost in today's madness... Yet, such a wonderful contest offering! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck!
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 08-Jul-2020
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Chair of Bowlies

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This one offers both a smile for the reader and a warm testimony of faith from the author... well done! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 08-Jul-2020
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La Luna

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Wow.... now that's a whole lotta 'ing' words in there... unique contest offering to be sure! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :) ;)
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 08-Jul-2020
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Fireworks! by HealingMuse

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LOL!! Sounds like someone has had a recent battle with packaging in their pantry.... hope it wasn't the coffee first thing in the morning, but then again, that would explain the violence directed at that awful stuff -- and yes, at times, it does seem as though it is planned to keep us from our 'treats'!! ;):) :) A fun Flash offering, Jan - best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 07-Jul-2020

Life Ranching

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A fun poem that fits the contest's syllabic count - good job there! ;) The contest requirements, however, are that the first four lines must rhyme... :( Life in the country is grand (but busy)!! Would be happy to re-review if you decide to correct... thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 07-Jul-2020
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Happy Birthday, Teri! by Sally Law

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Yes!! Already done, dear, but here it goes again:

Happy Birthday, Lady Teri!! Enjoy the day with family, my lady!! ;) :)

Thanx for the heads up, Lady Sal! ;) Yvette
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 07-Jul-2020

What Is Up With Him? by damommy

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LOL! :) A perfect offering for this one, Yvonne, as it certainly just begs for some laughter and even a 'guffaw'! ;) Thanx for sharing your fun ballad! ;) Yvette
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 07-Jul-2020

A Loving Surrender by Spangle

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A wonderful feeling even though it was fought every step of the way, yeah?! ;) Great offering, Janet, that so many can probably relate to at one point of their lives... ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 07-Jul-2020


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