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Y. M. Roger

Caged by fayesh

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Whoa... you've done a great job portraying emotion that really gets to your reader in your wonderful collection of quatrains here -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 08-Feb-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Zoo Murder: Representation by Bill Schott
Chapter 8 of the book Zoo Murder:

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Wow -- such wonderful inter-personal skills there, yeah? ;) :) The zoo lawyer could be zoo-lander... he-he. So, one lawyer to represent all five, huh? Oh, this should be good... ;) Thanx for sharing , Bill!;)
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 08-Feb-2021

Compassion by Erika Seshadri

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Whoa.... quite the emotional offering (which is good considering the contest, yeah?) .... but very well presented for effect... ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 08-Feb-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Living Like Gypsies by BethShelby
Chapter 100 of the book Remembering Yesterday

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Wow!! What a wonderful chapter here, Beth -- but I gotta tell ya, that Connie was definitely a handful, yeah? ;) :) And what a great ending for today: yes, there's always something for which to be grateful! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 08-Feb-2021

Joey's Cremains by humpwhistle

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Lol! Darn right, he'd 'preciate it!! ;) What a fun one for the times here, Lee -- love the 'old gang' with their plotting... perfect dialogue to carry your reader through! :) Thanx for sharing that smile! ;) Yvette
So, have these guys been around before and I just missed them? Because, yeah, this would make a fun series! ;) :)
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 08-Feb-2021

I Found my 'Sparkle' by Sandra du Plessis
Prologue of the book 2. Free Verse Poems

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what a wonderful free verse you've here, Sandra!! ;) Love the style and the sound of the voice the reader can 'hear' as they read through it! ;) Thanx so much for bringing this one back for us!;) Yvette
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 08-Feb-2021

Slippery Slope by Lyn Peters

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Oh, what a wonderfully light, romantic jaunt for us older folks! ;) Thanx so much for sharing, Lyn!! ;)

care, much, for large --> care much for large

Conversation, with Ben, had come naturally and flowed easily and, to her surprise she --> Conversation with Ben had come naturally and flowed easily, and to her surprise, she

information. "I do hope --> information. [new paragraph here] "I do hope

him, at the local Stop N' Shop, he looked --> him at the local Stop N' Shop he looked

store and when they turned --> store, and when they turned

teen aged girl --> teen-aged girl

suddenly, and profoundly old. "You make --> suddenly, and profoundly, old. [new para] "You make

the mud. "It just never --> the mud. [new para] "It just never

snowfall so I could --> snowfall, so I could

right, a life lived --> right: a life lived

as she hurled down --> as she hurtled down [don't want her throwing up down the hill - wink, wink]

boots and she smiled --> boots, and she smiled

winter hat, the red one topped with a bright white tassel, the one --> winter hat: the red one topped with a bright white tassel. The one
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 08-Feb-2021

Give Me PIE! by robyn corum

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Well, you've succeeded in making me want more than I should... think I'll have another bit of candy as driving to get one of these is off the list for the evening and heaven knows I don't feel like making one - lol!! ;) Thanx for sharing, my lady -- a fun one for the day!;) Yvette
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 08-Feb-2021

A Winter's Sunrise by Judy England-McCarthy

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what a beautiful vision and overall metaphor for one in touch with creation and all that it comprises -- well done! ;) I would only suggest, perhaps, a larger font to help with the contrast... ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 08-Feb-2021

The Flower Said . . . by damommy

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LOL!! A conversation that I'm pretty sure the little hummers around here wouldn't even have the time to have - they're so fast and never seem to rest! ;) :) But such a fun offering for the club challenge here, Yvonne -- thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written by Y. M. Roger on 08-Feb-2021


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