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D. K. Mamula

Leap by Taylor Co

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This is a good entry for this contest. I like the story you have written. It is true, we never know what we are capable of until we try. The rhyming and flow are good throughout. Love the butterflies! Nice job and good luck!
Comment Written by D. K. Mamula on 15-Jul-2018

When Love Calls by Jannypan (Jan)

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This is a very good contest entry. Most folks choose only one word, but you have chosen three, making it more of a challenge. The rhyming and flow are good throughout and good imagery is used to paint a picture for the reader. The artwork fits this piece well. I see no need for change. Well done and good luck!
Comment Written by D. K. Mamula on 15-Jul-2018

Love Child by Anne B Francis

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Heartbreaking and lovely at the same time. I have several friends who have unfortuately lost children in various stages of childhood for various reasons. It is a loss no parent should ever have to bear. Well done! Thank you so much for sharing your work and God Bless!
Comment Written by D. K. Mamula on 15-Jul-2018

Breathe by June Sargent

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Beautiful sentiment and artwork. It's hard to read this and not actually take a deep breath. :) Nice rhyming and flow. Well done! Thanks for sharing your work and good luck!
Comment Written by D. K. Mamula on 15-Jul-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

How to Avoid Cute by Marisa3

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This is so perfect! I will be 53 this year and I keep telling everyone that I am just getting started. Your words are inspiring and uplifting. Your piece made me laugh out loud and brightened my day! Well-written and fun! Nice job and good luck!
Comment Written by D. K. Mamula on 15-Jul-2018

Piddle Diddle by closetpoetjester

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I needed a laugh today, so thank you for that! I guess that's CATitude for ya! (Sorry, I couldn't resist! lol)

Fun and witty with good rhyming and flow throughout. Love the way you put that little pause in the middle to indicate the before and after. The picture of Zoltar is great! You can almost hear his thoughts! Well done! Thanks for sharing your work!
Comment Written by D. K. Mamula on 15-Jul-2018

Inanity by elpsog

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This gave me a laugh! I've never heard that word either, so now I must "go and seek"! I wish more people these days would pull out a dictionary and learn the true meaning--and spelling--of the words they use. Nice job! Thanks for sharing your work!
Comment Written by D. K. Mamula on 15-Jul-2018

No Shoes Season by A. Willow Bends

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I grew up in West Virginia and spent most of my summers barefoot! Loved it and still do, though my old feet don't do it as much outside these days. :) This little poem brings back lots of happy memories for me. Well-written and fun, and the artwork is perfect! Nice job and good luck!
Comment Written by D. K. Mamula on 15-Jul-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Stand By Me by jaybird1

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First, let me express my sincere condolences on the loss of your wife.

This is an absolutely beautiful tribute to your loving daughter. Having the support of our loved ones in times of deep sorrow is so very important. No matter how strong we are, we all need someone to lean on. I'm so glad to know your daughter was there for you.

Well-written with deep emotion. Good rhyming, structure and flow. Love the 'main Maine' reference in the opening line. I see no need to change anything here. Well done! God Bless!
Comment Written by D. K. Mamula on 15-Jul-2018

Soulmate by June Sargent

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The artwork is spot on for this well-written poem. Good rhyming and flow throughout. Each line describes the word 'Soulmate' perfectly. I really love the last line. It shows the strength of the love spoken of in the piece. Well done and good luck!
Comment Written by D. K. Mamula on 13-Jul-2018


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